The metaphors and descriptions you used here were sublime, Ai! I have a thing for ethereal pictures and words that give image to the reader, so I was enamoured by your writing style here. You managed to give real power to the piece despite the word limitation. I applaud you! Amazing piece!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!
Great job. love the point of view on this. it's so funny how he's driving himself bonkers! lol
~Starfyre
All four chapters are great, keep it coming.
Rosa (Chapter 10) - Fri 15 Feb 2013
Interesting plot and Sesshoumaru seems to have been kept in character as well a feat on itself. Nice job.
All five chapters are great, keep it coming.
This story is interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
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