Excellent story. :)
| All four chapters are great, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
 How God Created Mother
 
 God took the fragrance of a flower,
 The majesty of a tree,
 The gentleness of a morning a dew
 The calm of a quiet sea,
 The beauty of a twilight hour
 The soul of a starry night
 The laughter of the rippling brook,
 The grace of a bird in flight,
 Then God fashioned from these things
 A creation like no other,
 And when His masterpiece was through,
 He called it simply...MOTHER.
 
 Happy Mother's Day!
    
 | I love the last few updates of your story here and consistenly cannot wait to read more. Can't say that I review much, mainly because I am too lazy, sorry to say :s. Come the story come as much you can, I'm loving it's progression.    
 | Sweet, keep it coming.     
 | Nice, keep it coming.     
 | Good, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!    
 
marisel (Chapter 82) - Thu 01 May 2014 | i believe we all have the same feelings for a family member.  just remember he will always be with you in your heart and dreams.    
 | I am SO in love with your fic! The narrative is very sesshomaru, and the reactions are all spot on with everyone else! I look forward to seeing where it goes from here :)    
 
Lakeiya (Chapter 104) - Wed 09 Apr 2014 | I usually avoid first-person narrative, but this story is so well written! The sensativity of Sesshomaru's thoughts and feelings is shown beautifully through your choice of diction and I absolutely adore the direction in which you're taking the plot. Thank you for writing this and please continue with the wonderful work!    
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