Excellent story. :)
All four chapters are great, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
   How God Created Mother
   God took the fragrance of a flower,  The majesty of a tree,  The gentleness of a morning a dew  The calm of a quiet sea,  The beauty of a twilight hour  The soul of a starry night  The laughter of the rippling brook,  The grace of a bird in flight,  Then God fashioned from these things  A creation like no other,  And when His masterpiece was through,  He called it simply...MOTHER.
   Happy Mother's Day! 
      
I love the last few updates of your story here and consistenly cannot wait to read more. Can't say that I review much, mainly because I am too lazy, sorry to say :s. Come the story come as much you can, I'm loving it's progression. 
      
Sweet, keep it coming.  
      
Nice, keep it coming.  
      
Good, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter! 
      
marisel (Chapter 82) -  Thu 01 May 2014 
i believe we all have the same feelings for a family member.  just remember he will always be with you in your heart and dreams. 
      
I am SO in love with your fic! The narrative is very sesshomaru, and the reactions are all spot on with everyone else! I look forward to seeing where it goes from here :) 
      
Lakeiya (Chapter 104) - Wed 09 Apr 2014 
I usually avoid first-person narrative, but this story is so well written! The sensativity of Sesshomaru's thoughts and feelings is shown beautifully through your choice of diction and I absolutely adore the direction in which you're taking the plot. Thank you for writing this and please continue with the wonderful work! 
      
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