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Wispr (Chapter 29) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Nice seeing Sesshoumaru letting his hair down so to speak. Interesting twist at the end with the village and scale!


Wispr (Chapter 28) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Oh Goddess this was a good chapter, love the chase scene and Sesshoumaru's comment at the end. I like the little things you add to your story to reinforce the changes Kagome has went through, like the effect of her screeching.

 


Wispr (Chapter 27) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

So cute how Kagome is pushing the personal boundaries between her and Sesshoumaru. Also like the scene involving the mirror. Be a great way of keeping track of Sesshoumaru's troops or even the other pack mates.


Wispr (Chapter 26) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Another sweet chapter. I do like how you are writing a softer side to Sesshoumaru without gutting his characters personality. Very well balanced.

 


Wispr (Chapter 25) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Like how you are writing Kagome's developing her kitsune abilities. Happy that her visit went so well and like the scene with the pearl.

 


Wispr (Chapter 24) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

It was sad what happen between Kagome and Inuyasha but you wrote their actions and reactions very well.


Wispr (Chapter 23) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Like seeing things quieting down between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Also nifty seeing Sesshoumaru being a bit flirty!  lol


Wispr (Chapter 22) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

The talk between Yukiko and Kagome was really revealing and well done. Love the ending scene between Kagome and Rin. Rin's comment was so cute!


Wispr (Chapter 21) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Having Yukiko traveling with the pack is creating some interesting situations for Kitsune Kagome. Having a blast with this story.


Wispr (Chapter 20) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Cool intro for Sesshoumaru's mother, like how you are doing Yukiko.

 


Wispr (Chapter 19) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

You really got a tallent for writing emotionally moving scenes and just love how you had Sesshoumaru react to Kagome's outburst.


Wispr (Chapter 18) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Once again Kagome see how things are from a youkai perspective in a painful manner. Like how you wrote her loosing control and assuming her true form!

 

 


Wispr (Chapter 17) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Wow now this chapter was really an emotionally moving chapter. Damn good work with this story!


Wispr (Chapter 16) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Now this was a very cute chapter, love the pack bonding that you have going on.


Wispr (Chapter 15) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Interesting seeing Kagome experiencing what it’s like interacting with humans from a youkai perspective. Good work on the fight scene and Sesshoumaru meeting himself!

 


Wispr (Chapter 14) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

I never grow tired of reading how you write the growing pack dynamics, very interesting and adds such a wonderful level of detail to the story. Also like seeing Sesshoumaru interacting more with Shippou.


Wispr (Chapter 13) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Now this was a cool chapter seeing Kagome go all out in following her kitsune side, though she still retain her core values. Again how you have been writing Sesshoumaru is very in character.


Wispr (Chapter 12) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Another great chapter illistrating Kagome is still her on the inside. Love the conversation between her and Sesshoumaru.


Wispr (Chapter 11) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Now this chapter really offered some very nice insight into the the characters personalities that really help to flesh them out more. Again you did a wonderul job in capturing Kagome's trouble feelings about the new her.


Wispr (Chapter 10) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

Cool but embarrassing bit with how Kagome is decided she needed to learn more about youkai etiquette. Also enjoying seeing her learning to be able to better protect herself.

 

You have done a great job at blending human Kagome with her new kitsune side. The internal conflicts are very realistic.


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