| blahh... I'm very angry at Kag's family right now, 'specially the mother: she commented about Kagome's happiness, but is trying to force her into a marriage?!? grr...update soon!!
| interesting....veryyyyy interesting.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
(Chapter 2) - Thu 28 Aug 2008
| very nice style of writing .... i love this story so far
| i love this story so far!
| update soon! this is great
Kanela (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Aug 2008
| This story has me intrigued. I shall stick to it and wait for you to upload more chapters. Good job!
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| ohh my gosh this is sooo good i love it you have to write more soon i have a question though how did he die or is that a dumb question because you told us that in the story? well eny way plz write more soon i loved it
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| LOVE IT! I am entranced with your writing, your story, your descriptions, your characters, etc. It makes me want more More MORE!
Lillaryn (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| I've always loved your work, once I got a few chapters in to Yellow Brick Road, I was hooked. I'm a spelling nazi, and fairly decent with grammar as well. I've always wanted to try my had an being a beta....so if you're interested, shoot me an email at true_clarinet@hotmail.com and we can work something out. Regardless, I love this first chapter, and hope to see the next of YBR soon!
--Lill
| wow...interesting....was Liam a monk or a youkai? I'm trying to figure which one is more likely for her to feel the warmth...I'm betting his family had spiritual powers because she didn't notice any weird markings.....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
too lazy to log in (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| Only the most minuscule of errors, m'dear. This story sounds so very interesting. Your characterizations so far are up to par. I am quite interested in this story and await the next chapter
| You have piqued my interest with this story. Very original and thoughtful plot. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon:)
| Wow, Emmaren...this is absolutely intriguing. And like a previous reviewer stated, there were a few spelling and grammar errors but nothing huge. This is refreshing and original. And like YBR, you are descriptive and it just flows like MELTED BUTTER! Such talent!
Cochrann (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| This has the potential to be an exciting and interesting story. Your characterizations of Sess and Kags looks spot on so far and I love the old fashion matchmaker.
Connie (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Aug 2008
| ooh im kinda curious as to wht would happen, lols :]
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