'Chocolate Smiles' is absolutely stunning. I am very happy that you wrote this wonderful story; filled with humour, fluff and a lovely plot. The 'lemon' chapter was erotic and sensual- a gentle passion rather than an... explosive fight like some others I have come across. Exactly what I like reading! 
Your character establishment and development was masterful- Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship felt truly natural as it progressed and I loved the twins! *Secretly wishes you will write a sequel so there will be two sets of twins!* 
And SM's prompts were also well-written. All and all, a great read! Your stories are enthralling and I hope you continue the good work :) 
Thank you for hours of entertainment! 
UnknownRandomness 
      
TKE (Chapter 13) - Wed 11 Sep 2013 
awwwww.....so sweet!!!!! 
      
What a terrific ending to a fantasticly sweet love story, hellcat :)It was funny how Sesshomaru was both horrified yet resigned to become a taste tester for something he thinks would be totally disgusting if it would make her happy. I love the characterization with how you made Sesshomaru this sweet, doting father figure. I feel in love with him all over again *sighs dreamily* Now that's what I call an irresistable man.  
  
      
Perfect ending to a great story. Thank you! 
      
Mimiru (Chapter 13) -  Tue 10 Sep 2013 
a very cute ending to a very cute story!! 
sad to see it go. 
      
This story was amazing and I enjoyed. 
      
Amy (Chapter 8) -  Wed 07 Aug 2013 
Yay! A real date...ALONE! LOL 
      
Amy (Chapter 7) -  Wed 07 Aug 2013 
Well turnabout is fair play, she got to perv on his half-naked body last chapter! 
      
Amy (Chapter 6) -  Wed 07 Aug 2013 
She said yes! 
      
Amy (Chapter 5) -  Wed 07 Aug 2013 
This chapter was so cute! I love Kagome and the children bonding!  
      
Amy (Chapter 4) -  Wed 07 Aug 2013 
Nice! She has already gotten him in her home and now naked! Good Job Kagome! ;) 
      
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