"That... took longer than expected." Ha, no shit!  Great story. I love your style...hope to read more!
| That was so lovely! I very much enjoyed reading this, and had to laugh especially at the "Jaken, Jaken, why are you so green?" Very nice one-shot!     
 | Awwwwww....what a sweet story of love. ;)    
 
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Jan 2013 | Great story    
 
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Jan 2013 | Did you have this posted somewhere else under another name?  I remember reading this a long time ago, but can't remember where.  Loved it then, love it now! Amber    
 
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Jan 2013 | LMAO...I love what he said!    
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