I love this story and it is in one of my favorite sections. I was wondering how you came up with the name names for the characters like the sun and the mother and the mate? They sound like Japanese names when I tried to look up Yue couldn't find out what it meant or Satori for that matter
I don't know why I held off on reading this, as I've yet to read anything you've written and not immediately make it a favorite. I'm glad I waited, though. It's like saving the expensive chocolate for special occasions: I can enjoy Hershey's and savor a brownie, but I never forget I've hidden that ghirardelli to savor when I have the time to appreciate it.
This was a wonderful story, and your Sesshomaru is heartbreakingly perfect. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
WyrdSmith
Wonderfully written!
I had a hard time stepping away from this story when I needed to ( like at work!)
Simply adorable! You kept everyone so in character and created such a lobely depth in them! Love the story and the name for the baby (:
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Don't end....
What a masterpiece.
I will never get tired of this story.
*Bows* Thank you for writing this. Thank you.
Perfection.
I had to hold my breath the whole chapter.
Had to remind myself to breathe here and there or else I would have passed out.
So dark...heart throbbing...painful....
I always loved this chapter.
I love the painting he drew of her.
It just....It was just the perfect symbol of his love for her. It silently represented his heart....the pain and anguish he felt after being forced to mate another other than Kagome. It leaves me to imagine his pain....and left me crying for him.
I swear...I felt paralyzed for a few seconds.
I would have never thought that Sesshomaru would paint or garden! But.....the way you portrayed him in this story convinces me that...it sort of fits his character too. Oh my, how your words manipulate me so!
I love how Sesshomaru respects Kagome and allows her to speak her opinions... it just reveals that Sesshomaru treasures everything about her, while Kagome is the same strong and fiesty woman!
Hohoho! And the way you captured Sesshomaru's instinct....*swoon* SO HIM...SO REAL!
Yes...I agree that when happiness come too quickly after living years in bitterness...sometimes we question if it is for real. I love the realism that is so deeply tied to this story. It makes it even more heart wrenching.
Kagome's realization of the extent Sesshomaru gave up his happiness to protect her was so beautiful. I love how Kagome always realizes the important things. I'm sure Sesshomaru was healed a bit more by her words too.
"He's never been so close to broken..." this line...I can't help but re-read it. I don't know how you do it. I really don't know how you can create such beautiful and emotional lines!
Oh......*breathes in and out*
I love the way you paint your stories with emotions and more emotions. The way you cracked Sesshomaru's mask was just...breathtaking. It makes so much sense for Sesshomaru to not show his emotions to anyone...yet he needs someone to relieve his burdens and secrets too. The way you explained that Kagome was the one who made him crave for this someone was just perfect. Of course, Kagome's reaction to his fallen mask was realistic...I mean....she should be shocked...anyone would be.
I just love the ache in this chapter....it give readers a heart wrenching ache!!! Ah! I love it.
*shivers*
I read this oh so many times....and I find myself left with an ache of pain and overflowing emotions all the time. I haven't left a review for so long...and I apologize...but....your stories just make me speechless...
How powerful this story is...still gives me the chills.
I love how Sesshomaru is portrayed in this story. He is a demon...and at times I forget that.
Here....here he is in love with Kagome...and you can see it, even though there is no interaction between Kagome and him.
I love the plot....I just love it. I can understand why Satori forced Sesshomaru to mate Yue. And Yue seems like the typical court ladies that are greedy. I can just imagine the Demon courts....even though you do not go into detail.
Oh, how I love this story.
Really love this!!!
Such a good story!!!! Maybe a sequel for this story?
Hope you had fun to write this^^
Silence-Midnight
Loved it! This one has become one of my favorite stories of Sesshoumaru & Kagome. Absolutely wonderful!!
So....so.....beautiful...this was....just....this is why you are my favorite sess/kag author.
Sigh! Perhaps you should write a sequel of Kags and Sessy reuniting with her Mom, Grandfather and brother. Anyway, such a beautiful story! Keep up the good work!
Shōjiki (Chapter 7) - Thu 28 Mar 2013
I really liked the plotline, and the first few chapters were awesome; they were heartwarming--SessKag in its most potent and pure form. However, as the stroy progressed, I felt as if the character of Kagome became detatched from me. She became so much more perfect, which got my attention. "She had scored on her own I.Q tests above genius level at one fifty-six" contraidcted the person I known from the canon universe--the girl who was constantly stressing and didn't get heads or tails about math. Other than the alarming increase of Mary Sue-otic tendencies in Kagome, I find no other fault. Great job!
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