Hehehe. Naughty boy!
| Both chapters are great, keep it coming.    
 | She should definitely tell him so they can be together :D    
 | D: SHUSH INUYASHA. You're so mean!    
 | lol, so close and yet she still could not spill the beans, very nice.    
 | I wonder when InuYasha is going to finally get a clue. Very nice so far    
 | Keep it coming.    
 
Lumi (Chapter 20) - Thu 31 Jan 2013 | When you use actions in parathensis like this, it makes the story read more like a roleplay or a first draft. You might want to put more emphasis into descriptors, especially in the middle of quotations.    
 | Uh oh! I wonder how inuyasha is going to take the news!    
 | Keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming.     
 | Keep it coming.    
 | Both chapters are great, keep it coming.     
 | I liked it (:  but! Please remember for this challenge that Drabbles must be 100word length while chapters are 1500word length (: ill let it slide this time (; just reminding you!    
 | Both chapters are great, keep it coming.     
 | Loves it!  Excellent job my dear! #patientlybutnotsopatientlywaiting   <3 Mistress    
 | LOVZEZ IT!    
 | *arms outstretched reaching towards the sky* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO   I wanted it you tease! :P  Loved it as always! :)   -Your faithful servant-   MOR    
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