Hehehe. Naughty boy!
Both chapters are great, keep it coming. 
      
She should definitely tell him so they can be together :D 
      
D: SHUSH INUYASHA. You're so mean! 
      
lol, so close and yet she still could not spill the beans, very nice. 
      
I wonder when InuYasha is going to finally get a clue. Very nice so far 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Lumi (Chapter 20) -  Thu 31 Jan 2013 
When you use actions in parathensis like this, it makes the story read more like a roleplay or a first draft. You might want to put more emphasis into descriptors, especially in the middle of quotations. 
      
Uh oh! I wonder how inuyasha is going to take the news! 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming.  
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.  
      
I liked it (:  
but! Please remember for this challenge that Drabbles must be 100word length while chapters are 1500word length (: ill let it slide this time (; just reminding you! 
      
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.  
      
Loves it!  Excellent job my dear! 
#patientlybutnotsopatientlywaiting 
  
<3 
Mistress 
      
LOVZEZ IT! 
      
*arms outstretched reaching towards the sky* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 
  
I wanted it you tease! :P  Loved it as always! :) 
  
-Your faithful servant- 
  
MOR 
      
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