Reviews for My Lord by Magz2015

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Mon 31 Dec 2012

Keep it coming.


Ali (Chapter 1) - Mon 31 Dec 2012

love it keep going


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 7) - Mon 31 Dec 2012

Loving this story.  It is setting up the foundation for an epic love story.  I like how you take your time to build the relationships and allow us to know more about the characters.  I am settling myself in for the long haul, this story seems to be worth the wait!


Dark Topaz (Chapter 1) - Fri 28 Dec 2012

This has realy grabbed me and I hope you keep writing


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Fri 21 Dec 2012

It's been a months since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Fri 30 Nov 2012

Keep it coming.


Jow (Chapter 4) - Tue 20 Nov 2012

Sooo Interesting! Does Kagome have the Shikon no Tama inside, is that why her powers are null and void?

Hope to read more soon! You've got me eager for more!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Mon 19 Nov 2012

Great story, keep it coming.


Lilla (Chapter 4) - Mon 19 Nov 2012

Hi

 

Interesting story and plot, but please, go back and read trouhg again, or give it to a beta, because the errors are lot, and disturbing the flow ot the story.

Just one thing, if a girl goes through maturing, like you implied in the first chapter, at the age of six, the she needs a doctor fast, not a nanny. Sorry, the biologist raised her head in me :D MAybe you should word it a little bit otherwise.


kathryn (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Nov 2012

ive enjoyed the 4 chapters you have posted so far and am looking forward to the rest of the story


Midian (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 Nov 2012

great start  keep it up


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