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rose (Chapter 11) - Sun 09 Feb 2014

next chapter please


hana sora (Chapter 11) - Sun 09 Feb 2014

aw sweet. . yes they 're better be a friends. . so whats up with sesshy and kagome next?


mari (Chapter 11) - Sat 08 Feb 2014

loved the update thanks.


flamehime101 (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Feb 2014

Love your story please update

 


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 10) - Tue 23 Jul 2013

lease keep updating


Trisha Cheshire (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 Jul 2013

Great as always. I absolutely love it. Keep up the great work.


Denise (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 Jul 2013

Thanks for the update :) Very long chapter, but interesting. I feel bad for Inuyasha. He fell for it again. Lets hope things cool down now. Great job :D


mari (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 Jul 2013

love this story thanks.


rose (Chapter 10) - Mon 22 Jul 2013

next chapter please


Denise (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Jun 2013

This story is amazing. Such a different story. :)


rose (Chapter 9) - Tue 14 May 2013

next chapter please


Serpentine (Chapter 9) - Sat 11 May 2013

Some nice little weaknesses in the group's trust and emotions for Naraku to corrode. I'm wondering how badass you plan on making Nero and whether Sesshomaru is helping Kagome with the intention of using her or because he deems helping Nero's kind a worthy cause...


KEdakumi (Chapter 9) - Fri 10 May 2013

Ooooo...Can't wait to see what happens when he comes back


RubyJeweler (Chapter 8) - Mon 22 Apr 2013

:^D

Sesshomaru has insisted on joining Kagome and the others on their journey. Yay! xD

Thanks for the chapter.


rose (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Apr 2013

next chapter please


Orchidaceae (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Apr 2013

Yay update....more please.....I know....I'm a needy thing...lol....great story


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Apr 2013

lol Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for updating, it's a clasic!

Now to see Inuyasha's reactions -grins-


Midnight (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Apr 2013

I love it! I hope to read more soon.


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Apr 2013

oooooooh....im so looking forward to the next chapter!!!! I really like your story! keepit comming!


jo (Chapter 7) - Mon 01 Apr 2013

I just wanted to add some examples that I thought could have been worded differently.

“Do not speak foolishness old tree.” - "Do not speak foolishness, old tree."

“Finish with that nonsense. -"Finish with this nonsense."

on a second thought - "...on second thought"

That’s why he had to find out how was it possible - "That's why he had to find out how it was possible..."

The goddess guided her on her ways - "The goddess guided her along the way/...guided her on her way...etc"

Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to make leap into the man’s direction - "Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to leap toward's the demon..."

the reptile’s body fell few feet away from the miko - "...the reptile fell a few feet away from the miko..."

Thanks for your time!


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