| I just wanted to add some examples that I thought could have been worded differently. “Do not speak foolishness old tree.” - "Do not speak foolishness, old tree." “Finish with that nonsense. -"Finish with this nonsense." on a second thought - "...on second thought" That’s why he had to find out how was it possible - "That's why he had to find out how it was possible..." The goddess guided her on her ways - "The goddess guided her along the way/...guided her on her way...etc" Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to make leap into the man’s direction - "Her energy swirled around her as she forced her body to leap toward's the demon..." the reptile’s body fell few feet away from the miko - "...the reptile fell a few feet away from the miko..." Thanks for your time!    
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