I mean I do like this , because I like romance, but this is very OC and it seems very rushed. You started the love a lot, and if you add more build up I think this story could take the cake. Add a little more detail and just slow down a little hun C:
-Cammii
Daveio (Chapter 13) - Fri 28 Dec 2012
update
Yukia (Chapter 13) - Fri 28 Dec 2012
Aha I can imagine Sesshomaru smiling like a fool, also nice chapter and sesshy being OOC like that is kinda cute to, keep up the good work
Keep it coming.
Yukia (Chapter 12) - Wed 19 Dec 2012
AHHHHHH!!! The day has finally come!!! Continue please!!!
Keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Keep it coming.
Yukia (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Dec 2012
Sessho is becoming so horny! muahahahaha kagome is gonig to be so sore in the morning lol but oh well it's worth it isn't it? well i love it and continue
TKE (Chapter 10) - Sun 02 Dec 2012
Damn, horn dog is right...lmao!
Keep it coming.
Yukia (Chapter 9) - Fri 30 Nov 2012
ahahaa you made rin very well, she always is the smart one, and i just wanna see sesshomaru's face when he had to explain to rin how pups were made lol it'll be priceless but really amazing chapter love it and continue on!
Keep it coming.
demon (Chapter 9) - Fri 30 Nov 2012
Give a flashback on Sesshomaru telling Rin where babies comes from. It should be good.
Why can I see sesshomaru's face telling Ron how pups are made?
:) it was good update ??
-TheNight
Ah young love.... :)
Update fOr my liking please.?
-TheNight
Keep it coming.
demon (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Nov 2012
Awesome story. This will be a fun meeting when his mother finds out that her only son has mated with a human
Keep it coming.
Yukia (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Nov 2012
Awww such a wonderful lemon I should say, and sessho's n other seems nice I wonder what she'll turn out to be in your fanfic
Babies babies babies!!
Updates soon?
-TheNight-
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