Very well done. xD Including with Hayame. My character Hayame! xD
But yes, I liked this chapter. Even though I'm your beta and already know what it is. xD /shot 
~~Final chapter today?? How cruel and unusual...T__T  This fic, so far, is one of my favorites! It's honestly probably one of the only times that I like all of the OC characters and they all have real and distinguishable personalities! Despite how sad it makes me when I read how well Chi and Sesshy get along I just remind myself that it's a Kag x Sessh fic and I feel better...lol that and they're pack, so it's understandable. ^_^ Please update soon! I'll be most delighted if you do! 
      
All seven chapters are great, keep it coming, Happy New Year! 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
monica (Chapter 5) -  Thu 29 Nov 2012 
The story is verygood but it appears that your missing a chapter. When did Chiyoko's group come across Inuyasha group again? At the end of chapter 4 Sesshomaru was disparaging Inuyasha for losing a fight to a female and Chiyoko and Co. is nowhere in the area. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next! 
-Forgotten! 
 
      
Laura (Chapter 3) -  Tue 30 Oct 2012 
I love it! Great story!!!! Keep it up! :-) 
      
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next! 
-Forgotten 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Phoenix (Chapter 3) -  Tue 30 Oct 2012 
Love this story!  
      
Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next! 
-Forgotten! 
      
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 
      
I completely adore this, please please please update soon, I honestly cannot wait to read more! 
      
Interesting! I look forward to seeing what happens next! 
-Forgotten! 
      
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