I can't log on to update i think some thing is wrong with the log on thingy at the top because it been doing this to me for the last three months. so i wont be updating any time soon.

this chapyer seems longer than the one on ASS, anyway i like it and i hope that u will update soon!

Sounds like it is going to be a good one. What happens next? Keep up the good work and update soon.

For your first story this is written well! I do have a few comments though. It doesn't seem that Kagome would turn against Kikyo and subsequently hurt Inuyasha without first thinking of it or felt extremely guilty and sad. But if you can turn around and link it together to make it more believable then it can work. But besides that you're doing well so far, I want to read on.

I came to this site from ASS and was disappointed to not find any more updates. In fact, the 2nd chapter from ASS has not even been transferred yet. I liked the first 2 chapters and the way your taking the plot. The last time you actually updated was 7/30. I'm begging you to add more chapters.

hey. I like it. update soon

KIYA!!! I love it so far, lol.i can't believe this is your first fanfic!!! it rules! Although i think there needs to be a reason behing Kikyo's attack, just blame it on Naraku, lol

interesting *^_^* ...(although i don't see the reasoning behind Kikyou's attack)

you know i have been waiting for you to put this on dokuga. I cant wait. It has so much potential.

this story has a really good start I look forward to future chapters

dat was an interesting beginning. hope u can update soon XD