Keep it coming.

.... Oooooo Kagome! 

Update soon!

-TheNight-

I really love your description of Sesshoumaru! :D He's great.

The narrative was already better, though the tempus still changed in few places, for example: "He reached over the work station to grab his cellphone.  –This is the last time I do you a favor. – He sends the text to his half-brother.  His well-groomed fingernails tapped against the teak desk’s surface." 

I don't know if you're doing it on purpose or for emphasis, but at least for me it breaks the flow of the narrative. But it could be just me who finds it disruptive. *shrug*

Anyway, good continuation, nice progress, and a neat cliffhanger!

Your summary was really great and it drew me in, the unlikely combination of a phone help line and Sesshoumaru just was so intriguing!

This story seems to have a lot of potential, especially to portray a vast array of emotions! There were little mistakes here and there, but they did not really bother me so much. Only two things really stood out for me. One, Kagome thinking that a suicide would shame her family. If this story is set in Japan, you should know that suicide doesn't carry such a stigma there, and that for the Japanese it has infact been a way to save their honour (especially in the past, ritual suicides and such). Secondly, your narrative was really frustrating to follow. You kept changing the tempus between the past and the present throughout this chapter, sometimes you even changed it in the middle of the sentence: "She feared her conscious will get the best of her and win, sending her into the black abyss known as death. "

So I suggest you get a beta or at least revise the temporal verb forms.

I really do like the idea of this story! :)

I am enjoying this. Eager and intrigued to see how this will progess. 

Hoping you'll fill in the pieces of what happened to Kagome.

This has potential to be epic! XD

Keep it coming.

soooooo good, need more updates and asap!!!!!! please!!!!!!

Well that was a fast update considering I just reviewed the last chapter about 2 minutes ago... But either way I am greatful!!!

-TheNight-

Great job!!! Update soon!!

-TheNight-

This is getting good. I'm excited for future chapters and hope that you post another soon. :)

Keep it coming.

i love this story and i like Sesshomaru in this one though i hate that each chapter leaves me in waiting for more, please update sooner than later i cant wait for the next chapter!!! just to see what the cold stoic lord does to save a life

Illegal Hacking... I love it! Get her Sesshy!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.