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stoictimer (Chapter 36) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

that was beautiful!


stoictimer (Chapter 35) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

oh yessssssssss


Jenna (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

*APPLAUDS*

I give you credit for finishing a story so quickly also for writing it quite well :)

My favourite moment was when Kagome admitted to loving Sesshy and he said "I know." I had to fight myself from sighing in content.

And her little girl sounds adorable :D

If I had been you I honestly would have updated the chapters more evenly spread, but I am happy that you didn't :)

Again I applaud you.


Zalika (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

I loved the ending...I don't think it could have been done better.


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

First fanfiction I've read since I took a break from writing. Very nice, concise and not over drawn. No grammar errors that I noticed. Overall I really like it. Definatly one I will read again, when I don't know but I will. I hope to see more from you in the future.


Michelle (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

This story was great! I love the ending, great story.


jk (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

really njoyd it shuld be an encore of another story was sitting on edge for nxt chapter.


jojo661538 (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

its a great story i love it very much it had a little bit of everything and i could see it really happening in the story line keep up the great work i hope to read more from you in the future ^_^ 


Zoku (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

Great pace, great length, nice story, very nice job working the plot and story so that it seemed natural.
I really enjoyed reading it!
Great job!!

 


TKE (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

Oh god I love happy endings!!!!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

this is so sweet and i love that the baby is a girl! she probably has sess wrapped around her fingers :333


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

I really liked the story! It was way more epic and had more adventure that I'd thought. It's also very well written and executed.  I'd suggest though, writing a different summary for it, one mentioning fighting Legion and travelling with Sesshomaru to make it more appealing to the reader. When I was browsing through stories the summary and title didn't appeal to me, I thought it was somewhat vague and what drove me to give it a shot was that I saw this as a topic on the forums. I thought the title pertained to Sesshomaru and had no clue the rebellious son would have a big part in the story. I really liked that Kagome was strong, I hate when they make kags to be some whiny stupid weak woman, but you kept her strong and non-whiny. Thanks for the story, that was a good read!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 37) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

YOU TOOK MY VOICES! !!!!! x= thats awesome


Laura (Chapter 38) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

I loved it! I kept checking all day and now this! It is a great read and thank you! :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 36) - Tue 24 Jul 2012

you! iknowi'll still get you! i'm all !!! now!


Liz (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

Wow what an amazing story! I loved every chapter of it :) I enjoyed all of the quick updates and the insipiration for this fic. Good work


Pricila (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

What do i think?  I think is awesome, great, amazing!  I loved every moment of your story, thank you so much for writing it! 


Samantha (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

Thxz for writing this wonderful story. I'm glad I stook to it to the end. I would comment more, but I'm so exhausted lol. I look forward to reading more of your stories; especially one similar to this!!!!


Samantha (Chapter 37) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! *JUMPS AROUND LIKE A MAD WOMAN*


Sine48 (Chapter 38) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

I think you did a very good job. I really enjoyed this story! Thanks again for a satisfying read!


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