oh, how cute! I think a frazzled Sesshomaru is always adorable.
hehe, I was beginning to wonder where you disappeared to! Can't wait to see what happens next!
The premise, good. The setting, I can deal. There's just something not working for me, it doesn't flow. It starts and then a word, or the way you happen to phrase something jars my attention away from the story. I think you just need a beta, other then that... I'll see if I keep with it. No promises.
dianne (Chapter 12) - Mon 30 Jul 2012
Cute! I really like where youre going with this story. I can't wait to see what his thoughts are on Kagome!
2 cute
Smittee (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Jul 2012
Sad, but sweet. Sorry, for taking so long to see this!
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