Cool story! I love that you made kags a fox but still with her own coloring and spiritual powers (: the whole family by the end is just way to cute!

This story was amazing and I enjoyed it!.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

In the beginning of the story you were kind of rushing and it was hard to follow you.  Through out the story it was good, I like to see Kagome with Sesshomaru.

THAT that kagome we all know and love! lol screaming at the top of her lungs and tossing herslef inot her loves arms happily.

So basically, Kagome becomes a Mary-Sue invincible fox demon with completely different physical features and turns anyone she feels like it into equally mary-sue fox demons and they all live happily ever after with no character depth whatsoever. Kgotit.

The story was great and I enjoyed it.

This was a nice story :) It would have been really nice if there was a bit more description in the beginning, but overall it was a beautifully written story. Very creative too!  It is great that Naraku was finally defeated, and I loved how Kagome did not let anyone take advantage of her. Also, what is amazing is that you ended the story nicely. It is SO HARD to write a good ending that leaves readers feeling satisfied with the way things turned out. Which you did successfully. I can't wait to read more of your written work :)