Keep it coming.

Okay Dear.

138-first word is two combined.  Your word count is now off.

142-in the second sentence, it should be warnings, not warning.

149-'They were never going to be harmed' Sorry, makes no sense.  She's talking to Sesshomaru, right?

198-I can't believe you misspelled dying.

So, here's what I've got for you:  Was he actually KILLING the demons in the village, or just wounding them?  'Raining blood' seems to be killing...  Why is Mayumi looking in the west for help instead of going strait to the southern lord?

Annyyyywaayyyy  I had a whole other big spiel, but then I realized my mistake...I was confusing your story with either Forthright or silver's story....  Not in a large way, just as to what each character played as.

So all in all, I think you did a good job : )  Your reviewers are pretty correct lovey.  I enjoyed it a lot.  Now stop looking at your phone and get back to work!

~Kaikie

I think it's sweet that Kagome is throwing Sesshomaru a little party. Update soon!

Oh my gosh what a twist! Can't wait for more. Congrats on 200!

Keep it coming.

*clapping vigirously*  whaoooo! NICELY DONE!!!

Oooh. Jelous much?

Such a good story!  Those last few chapters were so moving. I loved it.

Keep it coming.

Time for Sesshomaru to kick some ass for what that jerk put Kagome through!

This is really a good story...:))

I lived in Wisconsin for several years, I totally get what you mean. ;D We totally prepared for our games, still root them on from Hawaii! 

Just found your story today, really enjoying it!

Keep it coming.

lol! Have fun!

:/ celebration?

Oh ho ho! I sense a bitter rivalry with you, Wisconsinite! For I am a Minnesotan! Har har har! lol Just kidding. Another awesome chapter! I look forward to more of your creative prowess!

Keep it coming.

: sighs : Right... that miko IS troublesome xD