Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Well at least possessed perhaps Miroku has a chance to take back over? :hopeful:

Intriguing story. So Kagome is to learn from Kaori? Interesting...

Thanks for writing.

Keep it coming.

Great revision! Aside from a few grammatical errors here and there (mostly dash issues), I've nothing to say but I hope you update soon.

Great story, please update soon.

The story has a good base, but your pacing needs work. You tend to gloss over details of the scene and characters that are essential in forming a story that flows naturally. While it's difficult to point out anything specifically wrong--as I said, there's a good base--the entire work needs more fleshing out.