Sweetie so far this is the BOBM. You have gotten so much better. Im loving chapter 1
| I still say death was too good for Inuyasha. Oh well, guess that's what happens when you push Sesshomaru too far. The only good thing is that there will be a sequel coming out of this.    
 | Late but great, keep it coming.    
 
rose (Chapter 20) - Wed 23 Oct 2013 | next chapter please    
 | It's been two months since you updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapter quick and not in months. Keep it coming.    
 | Go get'r Sango!  Can't wait to see what happens next!    
 
rose (Chapter 18) - Thu 18 Apr 2013 | next chapter please    
 | That was brutal, keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming, Happy New Year!    
 | Keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!    
 | Keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming.    
 
Sarah (Chapter 12) - Wed 07 Nov 2012 | I'm waiting for the consort to be revealed    
 | That is very intresting.I hope you are continuing it.But what confuses me is does Inuyasha not remember trying to hurt Kagome or does he..    
 | Love it! I look forward to seeing what happens next! Loved where they were throwing out punishments, then making her look like she was actually considering the last one - causing InuYasha to say the last line (which I found hilarious)! Love it! Oooh! He is in hot water now! -Forgotten!    
 | Inuyasha needs to pay for what he did to Kagome, keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming.    
 | Keep it coming.    
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