I'm actually disappointed this was a one shot! It has such potential.
| This was rather fun.  I love the idea you came up with, with the coming of the halo around the moon power within the priestess will peak calling males to mate - that was the basic idea, right?   Anyway, I see the gifting of clothing as sort of a precursor to Sesshomaru taking her as mate, kind of like courting and courting gifts, even though Kagome thinks it's in payment for caring for Rin. I sense you don't like Inuyasha very much.  Just in the two one-shots he's either led her on and not mated her, or he's out whoring around thinking he'll get away with it.  No matter.  Inu tends to get the shaft a lot within this community.  Though, he does still have quite a large following. Sorry, now I'm rambling and off topic. Good stuff.    
 | Great story, please update soon.    
 
amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Apr 2012 | Wonderful story, love the humor!    
 | this makes me giggle :3 i loved it!    
       
 
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