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Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Awwww. Sesshoumaru's speech to Kagome is so cuuuute! *Melts some more* This was so awesome, Lil! Rowdy will love it for sure!!!


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 8) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

"This one will always come back for you, Kagome." EEEEE!! So cute! So fluffy! *Melts into gooey puddle and dies of fluffiness*


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 7) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Eeeee!!! I LOOOOOVE this chapter in particular! So much that I had to review it and let you know! At first I was like, "I'll just review at the end!" and then I saw this line: "“I suggest you stop thinking what you are thinking, or I will begin doing what you are thinking.”" And I was like... I LOVE that line so much that I should mention it. But now it's like... I'm in love with an ENTIRE CHAPTER! Especially the last few paragraphs about that kiss. It's just... so... indescribably awesome!! I squealed!

But it's not to say that I didn't like the other chapters. I loved them too. I love your humor - you're very funny. But it's just this chapter!! AHHH!!!!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Awwwe... cute.

The girl finally gets her happily ever after!

 

 


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 6) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Hello! Cute little story you've got here, I enjoy reading it! :) I like the light atmosphere you've created between the pair and the humorous snippets.

There were a couple of things I wanted to point out, however. Firstly, at the end of chapter 6 you state that Sesshomaru lets Inuyasha keep the Tensaiga because it seals his demon blood. I think you mean Tetsusaiga (or Tessaiga - both versions are acceptable, I believe).

Also, you mention that Sesshomaru saves Kagome from Magatsuhi. Do you mean Mukotsu, the poison wielder from the Shichinintai? I know he does kinda defend her from Inuyasha (who is possessed by Magatsuhi) in the Final Act, but it occurs right before they destroy Naraku, and – judging from what I’ve read – your story is based around a time before any of that happens.

Anywho, I’m not trying to seem like a know-it-all or anything like that, I just thought I would bring it up. I know I certainly appreciate it when people point out my booboos, cuz sometimes I get lazy when I edit and I miss stuff.

Good stuff! I'm off to read the rest!


Saraniya (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Awww the last line was so cute! I love how this story is just the right combination of cute and sexy!!! Its a nice break when I want to get out of doing homework :)


Saraniya (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Touche Sesshoumaru!


Saraniya (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

Awww! That was cute but sexy! Where can I find me a partner to pay this game with lol... not in real life


TKE (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

that was so cute!!


Forsaken Tenshi (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

AAHHHH that was so CUTE!  Seriously woman, I am in awe!  That was wonderful!  XD <3 <3 <3


Diane Peter (Chapter 6) - Fri 20 Apr 2012

I'm really enjoying this. Have a slight correction though; Tenseiga is Sesshoumaru's sword, Tessaiga/Tetsusaiga is Inuyasha's sword.


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 9) - Thu 19 Apr 2012

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!  More warm fuzzies for me to read!!!!  What a delicious tale; so cute, so fuzzy, so... so... SQUEEEE-worthy!!!  Ugh, and now I'm abusing the punctuation again, but I just can't help myself!   I love this to PIECES and BACK!  Still, so ADORABLE!!  Definitely going on my fave list for reading again and again!

:D

~~Wiccan~~


Manatee (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Apr 2012

ah haha.  What a great idea for the socks to be the first.  Usually everyone starts with underware.  Can't wait to read more!


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