OMG!!! This story is amazing and I soooo cannot wait to read more!! Thank you for writing such a creative story!!!

i want more wheres the rest of this story? :(

Beautiful please you must continue this *.* 

I really think this is a fantastic story so far.  Are you still writing stories?  Are you going to continue with this one?

I know who it is!! I think? Kagome?

~*Dragon*~

I'm excited that this was updated again!  I think the characterization is perfect, even down to Jaken's internal monologues!!   Can't wait for the next installment, and thankyou for the entertainment! <3

Great story, keep it coming.

I like the story so far.

It's unfortunate that Kagome died, maybe Sesshomaru's tenseiga will respond to save her?

I'm excited to see everything unfold. 

I like your story and look forward to reading more.

AAAAAHHHHH! Please update soon! You can't just leave it there!? What will happen to Kagome?! Awesome Cliffy, I can't wait for the next update!

poor rin to find kagome.. oh well good job more please!!!!

Love this! <3

Aw poor rin! That had to of freaked her out! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Interesting start. I really like the concept of your story. Take us on an adventure oh great story teller!

Can't wait for the next update.

I'm loving this story! I can tell it's going to be a good one! I feel bad for Kagome though.