Hello,

I'm always happy to find a fic where Kagome didn't turn into a dog demon. You were really imaginative here, I don't remember reading a fic where she transformed into a bird. So well done!

I loved the chapters with Kagome and Shippou interaction! There can't be enough for me. :) And your idea with darkness and light is lovely. Though there hadn't been much of that. I do believe you could focus more on the darkness of Kagome and how Sesshoumaru is going to be her light.

The way you portray the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, or rather the lack, seems quite realistic to me. Kagome is the type of girl who loves with her whole being, here it turned into sort of an obsession, where Sesshoumaru is not interested in love but in power. And if he hadn't fallen in love with her while they travelled together, why now? There are many fics out there where Sesshoumaru falls magically in love with Kagome from one moment to the next. And it is refreshing to read another approach to their relationship! I totally support you with this decision.

This is a really nice story, I enjoyed reading it a lot!

And I'm looking forward to your next update!

Will we have updatez? I love this storY!!

I feel a strange connection with this fic! On one side I adore it and the idea, on another I am sad to see a clingy female that is like a whining puppy in front of sesshoumaru who doesn't even have feelings for her. The way she apologized to him. I realize she is not human and changed but she still has love emotions. It's contradictory the fact that she is in a way obsessed with him and in love with him. I can't understand this is youkai of human in her. Conflicting I know! Hm it makes me wonder, since in canon she loves inuyasha but isn't actually "fighting" for him and is just waiting! Here she is willing to take sesshoumaru but still... One would think that after being rejected so many times she would have her pride and youkai have pride as well but here I see her just being er... How can I say? She is willing to be with sesshoumaru even though he doesn't care for her? Her insecurities are still inside no? I guess it rubs me the wrong way a female that is chasing someone who won't love her and being so submissive... It's just my personal opinion that affections can't be forced so if you don't want me then I won't push! Sesshoumaru is shown as very cold in this and only wants her because she is strong and she will bear strong heirs. The romantic in me is sad to see this cause I don't see him changing himself for her the way she changed and sacrificed all that is her and was important for her, for him. It's an unfair relationship and she gets the short end! I mean no offence it's just my opinion! It doesn't mean I don't like the fic in fact I adore it and am so sad it's not updated but I understand that everyone has a life so I won't push! 

Still hope you will return to it someday! We will be waiting!

Thx for sharing your works with us!

Take care!.

Okay...yep...confused

She sounds like a rukh...

All five chapters are great, keep it coming.

Frickin hilarious lol "lech." Lol lol lol

i ain't goin to sleep tonight! 2:09 am and I'm goin in! Lol

KAR

BANZAI!!!!! 5 new chapters?!! Yay! I enjoyed every single one of them. Can't wait to see what happens next.

All six chapters are great, keep it coming.

0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o :333333 i likes this!

This is a blanket review for the latest updates. BANZAI!!! I'm loving these updates. And what is this about Mizuko?! More!!

Keep it coming.

i feel teased :p more!

Oh my my my. Want to see Kagome complete her transformation. *shakes her head at Sango for leaving* Want more.

I hope to see Kagome wipe the floor with that walking bag of bones soon. Maybe have Inuyasha tell Sesshomaru that it's a bunch of BS when it comes to not having love between demons, especially demons as powerful as Kagome and Sesshomaru. Can't wait for more.

yeah i dont fault miroku, but sango's a twat x=

I love how we get to glimpse a bit into Kagome's more fragile state. It makes it easier to remember that it's still her under her transformation. As for ideas, I'll get to you on that later. Keep up the great writing!

This is getting more and more interesting. I wonder what Sesshomaru has to say to Inuyasha. Could it be to rub in the fact that Kagome wants Sesshomaru in his face? Maybe have Inuyasha vent. Hmm, curiouser and curiouser. Want more.

Great story, please update soon.

Completely random, but do you have a beta? You're sotries (espicaily  this one) and imagination are completely epic. :)