I am so glad that you decided to continue on with this story! It's a good story.
suddenly, i had a thought, of miroku being that bold fairy, and sango being one of the followers, like that chapter in Evolution wherehe's all, "come sango, I'm anxious to see a bounding"
oh! on a random note, maybe faries, could be souls that were sucked into the windtunnel, and maybe miroku's dad could be one @_@ !!
raRr *giggles* i so love it when you make magic!
*big happy grin* yep, it only gets better.
I am so happy to hear that you will continue with this wonderful fanfic. I have always been your fan. I enjoy reading your story. They make me laugh, cry, hate...
Thank you for sharing your wonderful ideas with us.^^ Oh yeah, thanks for updating. I hope you will update your NarutoxInuyasha crossover soon. ^^
Kristen (Chapter 17) - Sat 07 Apr 2012
This was so good! But I'm sad to see it come to an end :[
Um...Ms. Sarhea, wait, is it Mrs. instead? Well, Sarhea-sama,
I was just wondering if when you said "the end"......you meant the entire story was over-no more watching the strange/ridiculously cute evolving relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome? I am a little sad that the last few stories I've read ended up being so short, while they were viable places to end the story, a part of me also feels like a cliff-hanger was left instead. I was truly enjoying this story too. I was really enjoying the hilarity of it in certain places, like the giant-fuzzy-Sesshy laying on her in calm, well mostly calm, domination, while she was terrified he was going to let some acidic drool fall on her, and Kagome feeding Inuyasha kibble. The whole road to her being “dominated” *wiggles eyebrows* was really funny and the collar at the end was interesting. With Rin being able to see it, I was confused as to whether it was physically visible or Rin’s power was the cause. I enjoyed seeing Inuyasha get put in his place just as much. I wish I could have figured out what it was that everyone seemed to be waiting on her to do, but maybe it just wasn’t meant for us to be able find out, like she didn’t. I did enjoy what you did give, and I will mourn what I expected would be given next. I’m still glad you wrote it, short or not.
--KD
lol i LOVE kirara's idea of the "twoleggers" I'd like to see more from her POV from time to time. either way! this was a good update and i cant wait to see how sleepy kagome deals with amourous Sess, no wonder he wanted her to sn0oze early keeping her up all night >_> raRr! more please!
lmao poor jaken!
wudelfin (Chapter 17) - Fri 06 Apr 2012
Mutliple wood nymphs and sprites applauding in the background.
Lol! Let's have a lot of kittens! That's something so feline to think! Rofl! I luffs Kirara!
Thanks for writing!
LOL! POOR JAKEN!
Aw no more? I was hoping that there was more. It seems like it could be a story with a second part. It's too good to end there! I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this story.
YAY!! I can only imagine what happens afterwards: a possible official mating ceremony or maybe a celebration of Naraku's defeat, a pissed off Inuyasha forced to watch as Kagome and Sesshomaru get ever closer, pups on the way, Sango and Miroku getting married with kids of their own. Inuyasha, well, being INuyasha and most likely mourning Kikyo's death after the Shikon is wished out of existence and being forced to bend to Sesshomaru's and Kagome's whims. His rank is not of an Alpha, whether he likes it or not. Maybe an arranged mating for the hanyou set up by Kagome since it would be highly doubtful that Sesshomaru would have any part of it, that is IF he changes and accepts his true ranking? Shippo and Rin would become closer as siblings of course, and drive Jaken up the walls. The only thing I didn't like about this story is that IT'S OVER. *pouts*
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