Oh wow...I feel like that came out of no where and yet I love it. Explains why Kagome is doing this and I quite enjoy that the "guy" she has picked up is playing along. Kinda funny that Kagome felt the need to tell him it was her honeymoon though. I can't wait to see what happens next and more of their unique and entertaining interaction :)
I am quite enthralled after all of this. At first, I got the impression that everything was a bit...foggy, a representation of what I'm sure Kagome was, drunk as ****. But when the gutter portion began, it seemed as if pleasure cut the edge off her drunken state. Then all of sudden, she was a bit more sober but making light of the sad situation that had sent her there, the part where she said "I'm on my honeymoon...”. It made me pause, just as much as Sesshoumaru did; I was appalled...well maybe just surprised. When she said he was dead, I skipped to the worst conclusion first, that she had killed him. >.> I know, I know, I'm so horrible, but to plead my case, two seconds later, I thought he must have had an accident. Oh, but it wasn't even over, the would-be husband fell to karmic justice for being unfaithful and cowardly skipping out on their wedding, not even showing her the decency to tell her. THEN, Whoo Hoo! Rewards for her faithfulness were to be given! *mind in the gutter* yes... rewards. *drool*
I'll be watching for the rest.
--KD
dianne (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Mar 2012
lol all I could think after reading abut how he died was "well that worked out nicely." xD
lol I absolutly love this story, please update soon.
jenny (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
Please keep going!!!! Wow,that was the last thing I expected her to say and I can't wait to find out more information about what is going on. I noticed that they haven't even exchanged names and I wonder why he approached her. You kinda described his appearance (why the short hair?sniff,sniff) and I'm curious if you'll describe her too. When I think about the fact that she asked him to go gently and mentioned that this was (supposed) to be her honeymoon, it made me come up with the theory that perhaps she's a virgin (like maybe she'd been saving herself untill she got married but, since he died before the wedding she chose to go on her honeymoon alone ,just to get away, to enjoy herself and then decided that she may as well get drunk,and have a one night stand to rid herself of her virginity before returning and getting on with her llife (?)). I'm very excited with the limited info we've gotten so far, which makes this so interesting and with all the many possiblities, I can't help thinking of all them all. Now I'm very eager to see where this is headed. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Anon (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
Lol, telling him that is... kind of a turn off? Or at least, it certainly opens much more than just one night stands.
Wow, so is this her first time? I probably wouldn't say that to someone I was just hooking up with but who cares if he's just meant to be a one night stand for now, right? Haha. Anyways, very elegantly written. I like your style. Please keep updating. I'll be sure to follow this story. :)
MEA
dianne (Chapter 3) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
aww poor kagome!
I wonder what happens next, please update soon! :D
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Mar 2012
Quite an intriguing beginning. I can't wait to see where things go from there. I didn't think Kagome had it in her. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
This is so awesome! I love the new story and can't wait for more...its so funny I just finished watching Rio on the weekend and then I see your story up here. Strange coincidence but not unappreciated. :)
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