I really like how you started this out! Nice air of intensity befitting Sesshomaru's character. Really set the mood for me.
| Oh. My. Goodness! I'm trying not to cry out here in the livingroom. TwT This chapter was so perfect to read, after re-reading from the beginning. I absolutely love this story. Sesshoumaru and Kagome's final time together (hopefully just in the feudal era) was perfect! Perfect! I reaaally can't wait for the next/last(?) chapter of this amazing tale!     
 | I am crying.    
 | I loved it all, but the last part was my favorite.    
 | I loved it all, but the last part was my favorite.    
 | Very nicely done.    
 | Gorgeous maybe?    
 | She is good!    
 | Taste in women, huh?    
 | I am so uncomfortable and really jealous.    
 | I love how she said that. One of yours.    
 | Hehehehehehehe!    
 | How was she supposed to know?    
 | That was very sweet!    
 | Kagome just wants to see Rin happy!    
 | Hahahaha!    
 | Oh Kagome!  Hey, does he have both arms?    
 | I was really having a hard time following inuyasha!  I laughed so hard!    
 | Awwww!    
 | I didn't know that I was waiting for this chapter until I read it.      
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