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Saraniya (Chapter 7) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

Wow... I really though there would be a baby but I really didn't see the accident coming and I actually went back and read the entire story and noticed the sunglasses that Kagome kept wearing throughout all the scenes except for prior to when she was dumped... Interesting twist I can't wait to see what's going to happen next :)


amy (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Mar 2012

Wonderful as always, but again i ask when is she going to enter his life again?


Angelgirl86 (Chapter 6) - Thu 15 Mar 2012

T_T...how is Miroku not dead after that one? I can fell that things are about to get more interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 6) - Thu 15 Mar 2012

yEy! more kagome! i'm interested to see where this fiction will go.


Tana (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Interesting twist with Kagura, I've always liked her and appreciate when an author uses her in a good way rather than as some evil, out-to-ruin-lives way. Cannot wait to see Kagome and see what's been going on with her. She doesn't even need to meet Sesshy and Rin again yet, I'm just so curious about what her life has been like for the last, what, 8ish years?


Tarawriter (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Rin's actions were a blunder when she was little, but as a teen she's old enough to know better than to behave like such a selfish brat.  All I can say is Sesshoumaru must be wearing blinders if he doesn't realize how manipulative the girl is.  It's an interesting take on the characters, and I'll be curious to see where you go with it.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

where's kagome? this is just making me hate rin more >:x


amy (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Wonderful chappie, more, more...


RubyJeweler (Chapter 5) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Hi Jay_chAn!

:D I like the story, so far. However, I can't help but wonder when Kagome will reappear in the story. (: Hopefully, soon. Anyway, thank you for updating.


KittyKage (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

I wonder how that work out with Miroku.  I wonder what he was doing at a jewelry store and what that party will be like.  Can't wait to see what happens next and what will happen to Rin for all the heartache she caused.


Rayne (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

Awww, that's cute. I really do like Kagura in this. 

Anyway, I just realized something. If Rin 'likes' Kohaku... won't there be a sort of meeting between her and Kagome again?

Like: Rin ->"love interest" Kohaku ->"love interest's sister" Sango ->"sister's best friend"Kagome 

Well, that's what I kind of think anyway...


Saraniya (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

Lady you are killing me with the suspense... you keep giving a glimps of everybody and its like you're pulling my teeth out! I love the suspense but at the same time I just want to see Kagome already...you do an exellent job of keeping a reader on their toes. Awesome update!


amy (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

When is Rin going to unserstand, that her father needs Kagome to be happy? I hope its soon...


RubyJeweler (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

I'm stunned, because I actually agree with Jaken. Haha. Karma is going to get Rin, and when it does, I'll be smiling. She deserves a crash course on how it feels like for Sesshomaru and Kagome. :D Thank you for writing!


AngelGirl86 (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

What a little biatch!!! I hope karma gets her good real soon! Is it almost time for Kagome to come back?!  The suspense is killing me!!!!!  Hope you update soon! ^_^


KEdakumi (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

Such a good story.  I've read very few where I'd like to smack Rin upside the head.  Can't wait to see what happens when Kagome comes back into the picture.


Tana (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

Ok, I can understand Rin's thinking at the beginning when she was just a little girl. She was still a spoiled brat then, but it's natural for a child to feel jealous of a new person in their parent's life. But seriously she's about 14 or so now and should really know better. I can't believe she doesn't realize yet what she's doing to her father, of course right now the only person she cares about is herself so why should she see the truth? What a self-centered person she's turning out to be. Also, I love how you switched things around with Kagome and Kikyo. It's always people (especially Inu) seeing Kikyo in Kagome, now it's Sesshy seeing Kagome in Kikyo = awesome! So excited to see when Kagome will enter the picture again and what's been going on with her all these years.


kagomesirene (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

:3

just discovered your story ..

wow Rin really is being a mean brat..really refreshing XD

poor Kagome i suspect she might have been pregnant....poor Sesshou...i magine him to be quite heartbroken when he finds out (even more so than he is now)


Rayne (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

Love it so far! I can't wait for the next chapter...

It's understandable with what Rin's doing, but I'm kind of hoping to see when she'll realize her 'blunder.' Really, she's like 15 now isn't she? (Six years passed since she was nine...right?)

 


Chaos Ninja (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Mar 2012

This is pretty good. I love how you reversed the Kagome-Kikyou dilema. How it's Kikyou whose the otehr instead of Kagome this time. I'm also glad you didn't have to make villans out of anyone to make the story work. Yeah Rin is ruining Sesshoumaru's relationships, but not in a vindictive way, she just wants to be with her father, which is quite understandable. I do hope that she soon sees the error of her ways though. Good luck Kagome!


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