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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 12) - Sat 13 Apr 2013

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Apr 2013

Keep it coming.


Anonymous (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Apr 2013

Wow, that was very Intense and Painful, but in a good kind of way! It's rare to find something so intense in just one page, but you did it really well!!


Aynessa (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Aug 2012

Disturbing and chilling. And yet....strangely compelling. A very interesting read.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Sun 08 Jul 2012

The story was great.


Kayelyn (Chapter 9) - Thu 31 May 2012

I think fractured mind Sesshomaru is the most heartwrenching thing. Someone who prides himself on his control, the ability to let nothing phase him, is gone, leaving something something behind that is just irrevocably broken. This also speaks to just how intensely he can/does feel, and also makes me want to cuddle him.

This is so beautiful in its despair, its torment. I have a feeling that I will be thinking about this long after I log out. Yet another amazing addition to NIS.


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 9) - Thu 31 May 2012

Oh dear...now I want to know where she is!!! It makes me think she's dead but the ending didn't....unless he's really had a complete psychotic break, that is.


Was that Shippo?! (Chapter 8) - Sun 06 May 2012

sugar0o (Chapter 8) - Mon 30 Apr 2012

BAD HAT! you make r0o sad! fixit!


Nyuka (Chapter 4) - Mon 30 Apr 2012

Okay this might sound totaly like terrible but I just could not stop laughing when he shoved his hand into her chest to grab her heart hehehehe ^-^

 

Nyuka


Kayelyn (Chapter 8) - Mon 30 Apr 2012

o.o This was perfect! Ty! I love you this has made my day. 

 

Shippo is such an underestimated character, and because he is a "child" it is so easy to forget that he feels love and hate just as much as the others, if not more because of the losses he has suffered and what he has seen. 

And in this he feels so strongly, all the love, the hate, and the utter despair leaps of the screen to create this world of total nothingness, a person who will only be complete with the restitution of blood. And it made me root for him; made me want him to get his retribution.

Awesome, awesome job!

 


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 8) - Mon 30 Apr 2012

Good grief! You have a knack for making me seriously enjoy these horrifying "what if" shorts. I like it...but hate it, y'know? Great job!


Loveyaa (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

You have quite a way with words and painting a quite vivid picture. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Kayelyn (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

Once again you have left me utterly speechless. I have been sitting here for 30 minutes trying to figure out what I want to say and how to say it. 

All that angst and the tragic-ness in the love, the need, he has for her. It is strangely breathcatching in it's beauty. What he feels is so raw and it comes across so so perfectly.

I said in the last review and I will say it again, you have definitely set the bar high in regards to the level of writing you produce.

Perfectly done, Hat love 


Kayelyn (Chapter 6) - Mon 16 Apr 2012

o.o 

Hat... words allude me in the best possible way right now.

All that anguish, melancholy, and confusion was so powerful. It was in every word; it just seemed to slam into me and imprint itself in my mind. 

So beautifully done, so well written. Perfection. This is the level of writing that I hope to one day achieve. 

Simply amazing Hat love


Kayelyn (Chapter 5) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

I had forgotted what an amazing charcter Miroku could be...until I read this. I love how he is accepting the burden of his knowledge of what is going on, instead of telling Inuyasha or even confronting Kagome. He safeguards her happiness like she did for them when on the hunt for Naraku. And it is heart-warming that he knows that this is the least that he can do for her in being her Sentinal.

Beautifully, beautifully written and done.


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 5) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

while it seems easy to determine Sesshoumaru and Kagome,  I must assume that the third male isn't inuyasha.. because why else would you talk of her outgrowing him, and why else would she have to sneak to be happy.. so of course since the third is not sesshoumaru, who could it be?  xD


sugar0o (Chapter 5) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

0o0o0o0o i likes that!


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

that was disturbing..  but not in the way that one might think.. it was more disturbing that one so full of life would feel so unwanted, unneeded, and lonely that she would willing lay her life down to be something for someone, in such a sense.  why wouldn't she just choose to travel with him, while still living?  that's what i don't understand...  

 

very well written by the way :)


naqaashi (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I suppose I am being asked a question. 

Or several.

"Do you need to be loved?"

I do. 

"Do you need to love?"

I do; I cannot take someone's love and give them an empty basket to amuse themselves with.

"Are you capable of loving?"

Now...that I'm not so certain of. I have always found it very hard to feel real, marrow-deep love for anyone. Not even my family. Affection comes easy to me, love...is a toss up that I'm waiting for.

"If you were capable of loving, would you be able to understand? That someone's need for love may be yours to fulfil?"

I don't think so. I truly doubt I have that sort of perceptiveness.

"If you were given to understand the above...would you do it? Woud you love them no matter what sort of love they needed?"

And this...is where I flee the conversation, because I do not even know what I am being asked. 


So this chapter came to me as a complete surprise. Not in the content - but in the lengths to which someone can go to attain, and provide love. How, to some people, love is truly the greatest reason for anything they do, anything they live for, everything they choose to die for.

I don't think I could die for love. Especially because I have not experienced such love, not on the giver's end nor on the receiver's. So to die for love - not a a sacrifice or out of grief or something dramatic along those lines, but to simply choose to die because that is the only way you can show you love...it's incomprehendible to me. I can't understand the motivation behind it - because i have the feeling it might break something in me f I tried to delve into how much onw would want to love and be loved, to reach such a state where it is the ony thing they are.

The very idea is terrifying. Terrifying, how much loneliness and emptiness and hollowness and brittle, fragile pain must be handled with every breath, waking and sleeping, to reach here. To do this. To love this. To just...love.

Thank you for showing me...someday I might grow the fortitude to actually understand it on a purely empathic leve instead of a cursory perceptive one. 

 

 


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