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Sadie_Fanfictioner (Chapter 6) - Wed 30 May 2012

Poor Shippo! but HALARIOUS!


Sadie_Fanfictioner (Chapter 2) - Wed 30 May 2012

Very nice, and OH MY GOSH THE ENDING MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD! Sex cookies!


Emma (Chapter 6) - Wed 30 May 2012

Lmfao this is hilarious


randomfan17 (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 May 2012

That was a surprise ending. Glad though because otherwise i'd of thought Kagome was a really eager girl to do all of that the first time with no other reason then horniness. Touga that desperate for grandbabies is funny though, i wish i could have read what his face would have been like after hearing they've already been dating a year, hehe. loved it!


Emma (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 May 2012

I love this story!


Eve Nighte (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Why hello again :) lol

Ok! Here's my two cents on this one....I LOVED IT!! I thought it was hilarious XD! Not many people can make a one-shot lemon funny but you my dear have successfully done it :D Job well done!

As for ideas, several do come to mind >D There is always the one-night stand (always steamy), teacher and student (or tutor and student) or lord and lady (obviously in a different time era). One that is always good is the heating things up after marriage and kids - you know, life gets hectic and a couple can't seem to make time to be alone lol.

Hope my suggestions help you out and keep on writing :)


henandchicks (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Wow!  That was truly satisfying!  Wonderful lemon.  You started me out with a laugh (don't pull my hair!), then had me gasping and then awww-ing at the tender afterglow.  And the behavior of the rest of the gang!  Priceless!  Keep up ithe wonderful work (as school allows)!


RubyJeweler (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Thank you for updating. ( :


randomfan17 (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Mar 2012

This was the funniest one yet. Rin will be ousted as princess by siblings abounding no doubt. Poor Kouga, but if he was making her feel uncomfortable i don't blame her for going with Sesshomaru. My only concern is the age difference, especially if her and Rin are the same age and he's her real father and not like adopted or something. I loved it though.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Another fabulous one? HELL YES! xD Thank you for writing another one-shot. Of course, it was an open ending, but it's all good. (:


Eve Nighte (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Hello again :)

Ok, first and foremost, I have to admit, I liked this pairing; I love the whole forbidden contact between a mature man and a young woman, instantly adds heat to anything!

That being said, this lemon (just like the others) was HOT! I loved the small dialogue that reminded the reader that this lemon scene was like a lesson (a lesson I hope Sesshomaru could offer me one day >D). I do agree with your author's note at the end of the chapter - the ending was not the best part but there is always room for improvement.

Also, you had a lot of one-line paragraphs in this chapters which -as a reader- felt a little too jumpy (for my eyes that is). I know I said before to talk about the history about Kagome and Sesshomaru (which you did; A+!) but this time, I found the lemon to be a little too short. It was hot, as I've stated earlier, but a little too short. In this particular chapter, the focus felt that is more on establishing the situation than the lemon. In the future, I would recommend challenging yourself by writing a detailed lemon that would make YOU as a writer blush; this is a series of one-shot lemons afterall ;).

Great job, as always hun <3


FayeMegan (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Hmm I liked it~


henandchicks (Chapter 3) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Okay, I enjoyed the first two chapters, especially the Midnight Muse (sex cookies!  LOL!).  But I have to be honest, this chapter was a little bit creepy.  I was uncomfortable when you mentioned he had developed a crush on her during her teen years.  Even if she's 18 now, if he started looking at her that way even two years earlier (given that he must be at least twice her age, probably more), that's just wrong.  I hope that you'll get away from the pedo theme in future chapters.  I'm sure you didn't mean it that way, but a grown man lusting after a young girl (Lolita anyone?) is inappropriate.


daapatemysoul (Chapter 2) - Fri 02 Mar 2012

Ah. Maze. Ing. I LOVED this chapter! It managed to even be better than the first one. The actual sex scenes are a tiny bit short, but the passion is very evident, as is the characters emotions. With a little bit of improvement, you could turn out to be one of my all time favorite smut writers, be it fandom or published. 


randomfan17 (Chapter 2) - Thu 01 Mar 2012

OMG, that, right there, was hilarious! Inuyasha's reaction was priceless but it would have been mine as well. Especially if she hadn't used bleach to cleant that whole surface, those poor unsuspecting customers. I loved the lemon too, in this chapter and the other one!


RubyJeweler (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Feb 2012

Hahahahhahaha...after finding out that Kagome and Sesshomaru did it on the counter, where the "sex cookies" were made, Miroku still ate his cookie. Yup, sounds like something Miroku would likely do. LOL.


henandchicks (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Feb 2012

LOL!  That was hilarious!  And juicy!  Keep 'em coming!


Eve Nighte (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Feb 2012

Yipee! I was SO happy to see another chapter and even hotter when I finished reading it ;)! Job well done!

The only suggestion I would give would be to make the story of the one-shot a little bit longer; give the reader a little more history on the relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru. History between the two characters can add heat without the need of a lemon. However, for the purposes of your story, the history will only add MORE heat to the already hot HOT lemon >D.

For example, in the case of Midnight Muse, if you had prolonged Kagome and Sesshomaru's 'alone time' at the crack of dawn, it would have given the situation a more teasing effect before the two -in the words of Miroku and Inuyasha- screwed each other in the kitchen.

All in all, you did a wonderful job and I hope to see more chapters in the near future. :)


nightsangel8989 (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Feb 2012

just gonna say this .... ah..may..zing.. lolz amazing job!!! loved the story and i cant wait for the next one!! :D


daapatemysoul (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Feb 2012

I have to say, as someone who read this not once, but 4 times in a row, it's awesome. :D I'm waiting eargly for the next installment. Though, I somehow suspect Sessh just might push the "anywhere" boundaries just a twee bit... ;)


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