Oh MY GOD!!! I can say I'm speechless you have a gift to write and my god this story keeps on getting better. I can't wait what happens next when Kagome realizes what Sesshoumaru did. Wow 1

Loving the story!! not caring about the typos either..I hope you can update soon...Ja!

Apology accepted! I think I finally understand where you're coming from about the typos. I'll definitely take that into consideration when I make future reviews. Again, sorry for the misunderstanding (and don't worry about your temper, because believe me, I have a big one). Happy writing! ;) ~MoonRose9

i love it! who cares typos are typos everyone makes mistakes we're just human and we can't be perfect no matter how hard we try...but i love your story and i can't wait till the next chapter!!!! =D

I dont care about typos. The writting and great. the story is different and i love it cant wait to see the next chappie.

i love the idea and the typos i don't mind i seen worst writers that i don't bother with a critic. as for you i looooooovvve it, and your a fool to not leave anyone hagging to their fate until the last chapter. though i wounder if you give teasers.

ps- i agree with you betas suck

There was really no reason for you to go off on MoonRose9. All she did was tell you one word was off....there's no reason to get all bent out of shape because of it.....btw love you story.

It's obvious that you don't want another review from me, but as I think you took my previous review in the completely wrong way, I just can't help but defend myself. I never even said anything bad; I was honestly trying to give you constructive criticism to improve your writing skills and any future stories you may write. I appreciate and love writing and I am well aware how long it takes you to write what you do as I have my own (though few and far between) little stories that I like to indulge in simply for the fun of it. I just don't understand why my review got you so mad; it was only a few legitimate pointers that I thought could help you in the long run, but you obviously took it the wrong way for some reason. Like I said, I love the story itself; it's very well-written and keeps the reader's interest. I just want to make clear that when I made the review, I didn't think for a second that it would offend you in any way. Like you said yourself, it was just a few corrections on typos, so you really shouldn't make such a big deal out of it; they were what I thought were helpful suggestions, nothing more. Despite this, I am going to continue to read your story and I sincerely apologize for such a misunderstanding. ~MoonRose9

Ok, I know this sounds weird, but this story is so twisted that I love it! Very good job! Keep it up!

hey, the stories great. i read the review the other person left about the typo however. i know this might annoy you, but honestly, she was giving constructive criticism. she wasn't really screaming at you about it, she was being really nice and telling u that she likes your story too. :) (as do i) so.. don't get too offended over it?

Another HOT chapter! I really can't get enough of your fic. I absolutely love it!

Love your stories! More please!!!

oh please add more chappies, at first i didnt think i was going to like it but the way you have written it is fantastic. please keep up the good work.

Very interesting and entertaining story, if I do say so myself. Love the lemons ;) The only real problem I have is the spelling and grammar issues (particularly the spelling because there are quite a lot of those types of problems throughout the story). The one that occurs most frequently is that you use "fallow," as in "Kagome fallowed Sesshomaru to..." when it should really be "follow" and "followed". Though "fallow" is in fact a word, you are using it completely out of a context since "fallow" refers to farming and "follow" refers to come or go after. Sorry for the spelling lesson, but I'm a real stickler for it and it really distracts from the enjoyment of the story. I suggest your thoroughly proofreading or getting a beta to edit the story for those kinds of mistakes before posting. Once again, it's a very good story. It just needs a little brushing up in the spelling department. ;)

woew that was different well i wish you could have her find out shes some one else's kid and they ccould mate but yeah i like this story alot keep writeing plz

Wow! That was something else... this is one of the most interesting fics I've read that involves Sess and Kags to siblings. I love your lemons so keep them coming. I look forward to ur updates :P

seriously wow!!!! Come on they still have to brother and sister? OH WELL LIFE IS UNFAIR BUT DAMN GREAT STORY AWSOME I'M STILL PROTESTING NO I'M KIDDING REALLY GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP

It is really good bump nd soon