Amazing!!! Loved this story!!

this is one of the best lemon fics that i have ever read. the forbidden love btwn two half siblings is a taboo subject, but the way you wrote this story was emotinal, beautiful, and erotic. i read both endings and i prefered chapter 19 to chapter 18. i know there had to be danger, but i'm glad you wrote an alternate ending. i will be looking for more of your work. keep it up b/c you did well with this fanfic (even with the errors). c'ya'

When i read it, i cried so hard because you really made me realize that love the precious person when they are alive. Cause when they are gone its no more. Thanks, you are really great!

That was an amazing story! You made me cry with killing them off!!!

I'm so happy you wrote an alternative ending!!! Thank you thank you thank you for not leaving me hanging at such a dark and tragic ending!!!

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Well that was depressing. I'm sure i might have the most reviews on this story lol. It was good but I wish you atleast killed naraku then i would feel better about the whole thing. I couldn't even read the alternate ending cause it felt like a lie. But by George this was an exceptional tale. So sad was the ending. But to future readers the author put itbas angst, i feel it should be tragedy. So just beware before you read  its a great read though.

Woa scary twist

Omfg!! This is epic!! O giving as much reviews as possible cause this Story is thrilling and worth it. But damn this chapter is even more thrilling than chp 11

Ah omg this chapter was just wow! This really getting better And Better. I getting all nervous and this is just a fanfiction. Damn this is a must read

Loose ending with this chapter they kissed, played in the pool then off to dinner with the family?

Oh wow i am totaly interested. Perhaps its because this taboo but this has me wanting to read more.

I'm not sure how you had the genres' set up before now, but if "Tragedy" were in there I imagine some people might have put two-and-two together. Then again, some probably don't look for details. I do. I hadn't seen a Tragedy label, and its the only other Sess/Kag incest I've found (not that I look! But when you find something like that you have to just look) so I had wanted to read. I enjoyed it up until you took the tragic turn. Then I started skimming. It does have several loose ends, and the alternate ending is nice to make up for the evil before hand. But there is some flushing that could be done, I guess. On the other hand, with the Alternate Ending it's good as-is.

Though it is kinda nice that their tragic ending had his sister finding that she should treasure everything, and bringing the remainder of their family closer.

I still hate tragedy lol

As for the proof reading, I just wanted to mention that all throughout there are a lot of little typos and whatnot. But they don't take away from it, at least not in my experience.

The majority of this was a good story, and I have to thank you for writing that and giving me a majority-nice little read.

I loved it!!! I rarely read AU. Actually this is the 3rd one I've read so far despite being a fan of the pairing since A Single Spark, and your story made me wnat to read more AU fics!

There were a lot of spelling errors though; nonetheless, the story was pretty good, and I'm really hoping for more awesome fics in the future. :)

well even tho the original ending had me in tears i liked it more only because how complete it felt with everything. but i wanted to like the alternate one more but alas the 1st diheartening one seems to be more fitting. thank ou for the great read lol and for brining some much needed emotion.

I accually liked both endings... which is extremly strange for me since i normally go for the lovey-dovey happy ending. It was a very well written story and i loved every min of it! Oh, and the lemons? talk about hot, hot, HOT!!!

STORY WAS GREAT. WHY DON'T YOU WRITE A STORY WITH SESSHOU AS DAD AND KAGS AS HIS DAUGHTER

i have to say Chibikko has a beautiful name

really, its awesomeeee. xD

Aki~the world's best name

:P

OMG I can't believe its over!!! I cried like a baby when they were killed--and even more when Sesshomaru's big sister gave her speech. Awesome story--it was beautifully written! :)