Wow! I hope you continue these, they left me on the edge of my seat, wondering what the end will be.

Somewhat hard to follow and doesn't have a good flow to it. Good storyline, but needs to be revised. Findin a beta would help considerably.

I think there should be a sequel to it one where kagome gets a happy ending n d rest wilowing in their guilt n how can we forget d two jealous friends n d youKai who ruined her life

Ok i love the twist and turns so far but really? This is what got to me ;" That should have been Kagome and I winning the election three years ago father not Naraku and that lying bitch of a wife of his” the story is just to far fetched. Why would sess and all the gang think kags cheated witout proof? When its Narakus wife telling them? I mean they're the opposing party so of course they would do whatev to it takes to win. This just isnt believable enough n sounds overly dramatic. It would be better with something more realistic. The memory loss n no speech AWESOME TURN OF EVENTS. 

That was a really great storie, it was heartbreaking and intriging, Please is there going to be a sequal?