I want more!

Great chappie, more please.

It's great so far, what unique set up though. Can't wait to see if they allow Kagome to take Rin.

Wow, awesome chapter!

Speech is written with quotation marks thought.

"Yes," he said. - example

I loved this cahpter. Sesshomaru's thoughts were certainly interesting.

Nice chapter, it's kind of difficult to keep sesshoumaru in character, but you seem to be managing just fine and the plot seemes promising.

Keep it coming, excellent start to your story, please continue to the end please!

Wow, that is a predicament. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru will handle that!