candace peaches (Chapter 25) - Wed 09 Dec 2015

this was a very good fanfic. i finished it in a matter of hours. it had me laughing when i got to the part of sesshoumaru and his family. his brothers are something else. i would be afraid, at first, to meet them. the sibling love that you showed btwn each of them was hilarious. miroku was the BEST judge in a story that i have ever read. the plot was light and fun. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good writing. c'ya'


Inuaddict (Chapter 10) - Mon 10 Jun 2013

Most adorable.


lashon (Chapter 25) - Tue 08 Nov 2011

cute!!! i love stories with sess as a dad especially a single dad. and rin was absolutely adroable! and sess biting her butt to leave a hickey was very creative


Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 25) - Mon 08 Nov 2010

entertaining fic and great ending. :) 

Thanks, 

Lady Nefertiti. 


KBloody (Chapter 25) - Sun 23 May 2010

I can honestly say, I have never had more fun reading a story. I swear I had a big, stupid grin on my face the entire time.  You sense of humor, and version of Sesshomaru is so refreshing, as oppossed to the normally stoic (or downright depressing) one I've become... tolerant of. I much prefer him like this.

And seeing you stick it to Inuyasha and Kikyo (who I especially hate) was icing on this already delicious cake.  Great job!


Christina (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2009

Good Story


Koroleva (Chapter 25) - Fri 02 Oct 2009

When are you gonna update!!!!! You leave it at a cliffhanger and im hooked I wanna read more! Plz update soon :)


ABundridge (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 Aug 2009
I really like the story so far, but it seems strange that they are going through so much trouble over a suspected assault charge. I wouldn't think Kagome would have spent any time in jail with no record or anything like that.

Silver (Chapter 15) - Sun 16 Aug 2009
I'm going to be brutally honest here. This story is inconsistent at best. Your grammar and spelling are good however, your characterization, emotions, reactions, interactions etc are completely random. One minute Kagome and Sesshoumaru are making out the next she's screaming that she doesn't want to be with him that way, and then she's thinking about how much she does. Basically your characters are not consistent. There's been no build up between the two characters and the circumstances of their first meeting were never addressed. Why Sesshoumaru forgot who she was, was also never addressed. These are key plot points that you just left to hang. What would make Kagome go gaga over a guy who was cold to her and had forgotten that he'd nearly slept with her the night before? While the court system you have painted is clearly a mockery of what would actually happen in court, it's funny and I understand that it was not meant to reflect an actual trial or outcome. What I can't understand is how Kagome and Sesshoumaru can possibly be saying one thing and then doing another. Your characters are all over the place and that is honestly the reason why I can't continue to read this story. I can't understand anyone in the family (with the exception of Rin) wanting to marry off one of their own to a woman they've never met before and have no prior knowledge of; especially when she's being tried for assault, guilty or not. Work on keeping character actions, emotions, and reaction at some sort of constant level it'll make your stories great as opposed to interesting and fairly well written. Please understand that I am not attempting to be unkind but simply trying to point out what I see as your biggest weakness as a writer. We hall have them, but if we can address our weakness and correct it then something came out of having it in the first place.

Lady of the Western Winds (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
Yay! I was so glad to find this story! I was following it before A Single Spark closed then my computer crashed and I lost it as a bookmark so yeah...I'm kinda upset you took out the part with all the inmates singing! I found that funny to picture but still enjoyable as always. I really love the chapter "Strawberry Daiquiri"! It makes me laugh every time, haha! Really love the story and can't wait for "What was I thinking?" to be updated!

Kanela (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
Awww, so great a story!! I remember reading it before on A single spark. I was following it, but never finished it. I'm happy I got the chance to remember I had been reading this haha. You did a great job girl. Thank you for a wonderful fanfic.

AmaViarra (Chapter 25) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
wow. O.O that was a wonderful story! Great job :) It was very adorable. N Naughty ^_- Are you planning on writing an epilogue up, or a sequel to this story?Cause I would love to see either. Wonderful job! It was written well!

unknown (Chapter 3) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
hey .. finally !! its on Dokuga .. u know i was readin it on single spark n reached chapter 21 but then it was shut down :( .. anywayz i luv this story n hope u'd update soon :D keep the good work up

Lilith (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
that was really good! I loves it! :3 I nearly died when they gave eachother nicknames. hehe, monkey... kitten.. that good.. But I can't believe Kags is getting arrested, good thing Sesshy is a lawyer. ^.-

phishbon3s (Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
This has always been one of my favorite stories. And my most favorite portrayal of Miroku. Anytime the honorable judge Miroku saughters in, I nearly pass out of asphyxiation due to laughing too hard. You gotta love that man, and you portray him wonderfully. The Inu family is to die for and sinfully fun. The budding relationship betwix Sesshoumaru and Kagome is delightful. The prison sing-along was beyond funny!

Pollyanna (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Mar 2009
This is a great story! I don't see anything wrong with your spelling or your grammer. I can't see any of the common "their=there"s or "you're=your"s either. The story idea is awesome! You apparently haven't written anthing for quite a while. Please continue udating!

MomoDesu (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jul 2008
I am beyond thrilled to see this here. I adored it the first time I read it at A Single Spark, and I'll love revisiting it here. -MD

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