HEY I'M LOVING THIS STORY  :) DON'T LET THE PLOT BUNNIE WIN!!!! 
I THINK THE BEAST OF WHALES =The Beast of Brymbo   
a 6ft tall, horned, cow-like creature standing on its hindquarters  :) 
 i say sesshoumaru would still win easy  ! :P lol 
      
Jaru Javelle (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Jan 2012 
I would guess Beowolf, a great warrior, or Grendel, the feared monster. 
      
Nilee1 (Chapter 6) -  Sat 07 Jan 2012 
Or it could be King Arthur wielding Excalibur--yeah that works 
  
      
Nilee1 (Chapter 6) -  Sat 07 Jan 2012 
I'm guessing The Beast of Bont 
  
      
dianne (Chapter 6) -  Sat 07 Jan 2012 
| is it beast from beauty and the beast ? please tell me it is :)
       
Because he needs to learn that touching what is not his is unwise!   I shivered.  I actually shivered!  Thank you so much for this wonderful story. 
      
Zalika (Chapter 6) -  Sat 07 Jan 2012 
I like this story. I love parts where Sesshomaru gets possessive of Kagome. I'm curious for the next update. 
      
Sassy C (Chapter 5) -  Wed 04 Jan 2012 
I'm usually not a fan of first-person fanfiction. But I'm finding this story so incredibly good! Please update soon!!! 
      
Nilee1 (Chapter 5) -  Wed 04 Jan 2012 
I love this story. It is so rare that a story is told from Sesshoumaru's point of view. You make him poetic in his brievity and insight. Please update soon. 
      
You have hooked me already!  I normally don't enjoy first person narratives, but I have to admit, I am finding it intriguing hearing the story from Sesshomaru's point of view.  Lovely (and I suspect, well-thought-out) word choice.   
      
I am so glad you continued this story.  I'm also glad you left it in Sesshoumaru's POV.   
      
Yay! You continued. XD 
  
Can't wait to see what happens. 
      
i second the motion of other readers as well. please add some more. i love listening to sesshy's thoughts.  
      
Brianna (Chapter 3) -  Mon 02 Jan 2012 
i love this story its so cute:) 
      
XD 
If you can continue this PLEASE do!!!!!!! I want to read more... her coming around or what he might do.  Please consider writing more if you have the time. 
*Throws sugary goodness your way* *... and salty goodness to just in case. * XD 
      
This was beautiful along with his thoughts.  I wish you could add some more chapters to this depicting Kagome slowly coming to see Sesshoumaru in a different light that leads to love.  It would not have to be a long story (even though I lke them).  This one-shot shows that you have the talent for a chapter story. 
      
such a great story.  really capturing the youkai in his thoughts of what we could considered romance 
      
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