Reviews for Bird Watching by Avadrea

Chaos Ninja (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Jun 2012

Hahaha! I literally loled when I read that last line! I am a bit disappointed I didn't get to see Kagome rip into him, but the ending was just great!


Tessitura (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

LOL!!!!! oh that was just HAHAHAHAHA!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Feb 2012

This is freakin awesome! I laughed so hard I cried. Great job.


Koki (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Jan 2012

XD omg that hilarious!


henandchicks (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jan 2012

Loved it!


amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Funy on a stick, thank you for making my day!


Valaroma (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

That was great! Very funny!


Scarlet (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Oh thank you avadrea! you just made a bleak day side spliting. really like the humor. LOV THE MIROKU DOORMAT!

keep it coming

love scarlet


RubyJeweler (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Hahahahhaa. Bird watching, indeed. Poor Sesshy doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. :D


NicoRavenPen (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

~~XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Ohhhhh that was GREAT! Fantastic, chica!


Diane (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Well the plot is good, you have rather weird errors though since about half the time you use things correctly & then the other half they're goofed, like were/where & definitely/defiantly. Where/were examples; "Where" refers to a question about a place or location of something, such as: "Where is our table?" "Were" is the plural form of "was." For example:"I WAS at the concert last night. We WERE there all together with my friends." Definitely is a form of definite, you're sure about something, defiantly is along the lines of your mother wears army boots or so's your old man. You also have missing words here & there of the the, as, etc kind.


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Hilarious! Sesshoumaru actually answered "Bird Watching" LMAO!! And Miroku got socked in the head by some kind of soap bottle, then stomped on by Kagome as she made her way over. I absolutely loved it and I'm hoping for more soon.

 

--Kaminoko


TKE (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

OMG.....soooo busted....LMAO!!!


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