Reviews for The Calling by Huntress11

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SilverInu93 (Chapter 7) - Mon 15 Sep 2014

i hope this will continue its verey good


Amaryllis (Chapter 7) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

I love te story,  i hpe you continue writting it. :D


Grimmichi (Chapter 7) - Thu 21 Feb 2013

good so far, but why all women? some man candy would have been a little nice :D


Venita (Chapter 6) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

I can't believe a cliffhanger, please update soon.


Venita (Chapter 6) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Keep it coming.


Suka25 (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

OMG I cant wait for the fight Oh they shouldnt of made Kagome mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mistake number 1


Venita (Chapter 5) - Mon 30 Jan 2012

I can't wait to see kagome kick their butt, please update soon.


Alexis (Chapter 5) - Sun 29 Jan 2012

Can't wait to see kagome kick some ass


amy (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

Wipe the floor with them, let him mate Kagome despite everyone....


Venita (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

Love the story, please update soon.


Alexis (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

awwwww.......cant wait until the next chapter


Venita (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Great chapter, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Karli (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

This is great i can not wait for you to share


Diane (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.


Diane (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.


Alexis (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

cant wait until the next chapters. i hope kagome is kickass


Alexis (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Jan 2012

I really like this story. Cant wait until the next chapters


Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Pretty good story but watch the typos and pronouns. Can't wait to see what happens next.


Sala (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Please spell-check your work; there are many errors.  It also wouldn't be a bad idea to put an advertisement on the forum for a Beta reader, as you could also use a bit of assistance with your grammar. 


Venita (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

This story is interesting, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


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