Reviews for The Calling by Kayla

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Amaryllis (Chapter 7) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

I love te story,  i hpe you continue writting it. :D


Grimmichi (Chapter 7) - Thu 21 Feb 2013

good so far, but why all women? some man candy would have been a little nice :D


Venita (Chapter 6) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

I can't believe a cliffhanger, please update soon.


Venita (Chapter 6) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Keep it coming.


Suka25 (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2012

OMG I cant wait for the fight Oh they shouldnt of made Kagome mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mistake number 1


Venita (Chapter 5) - Mon 30 Jan 2012

I can't wait to see kagome kick their butt, please update soon.


Alexis (Chapter 5) - Sun 29 Jan 2012

Can't wait to see kagome kick some ass


amy (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jan 2012

Wipe the floor with them, let him mate Kagome despite everyone....


Venita (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

Love the story, please update soon.


Alexis (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

awwwww.......cant wait until the next chapter


Venita (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Great chapter, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Karli (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

This is great i can not wait for you to share


Diane (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.


Diane (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.


Alexis (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2012

cant wait until the next chapters. i hope kagome is kickass


Alexis (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Jan 2012

I really like this story. Cant wait until the next chapters


Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Pretty good story but watch the typos and pronouns. Can't wait to see what happens next.


Sala (Chapter 2) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Please spell-check your work; there are many errors.  It also wouldn't be a bad idea to put an advertisement on the forum for a Beta reader, as you could also use a bit of assistance with your grammar. 


Venita (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

This story is interesting, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


inukoi (Chapter 2) - Wed 28 Dec 2011

Good Story so far, i really like it and can't wait to see where you take it.  A tip for you, never use text type in your writing.  If you want to say laugh out loud write it never put LOL.  It takes away from your story and makes you look like a poor writer.  But besides that i am enjoying your story and can't wait to see what happens next.


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