good so far, but why all women? some man candy would have been a little nice :D

I can't believe a cliffhanger, please update soon.

Keep it coming.

OMG I cant wait for the fight Oh they shouldnt of made Kagome mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mistake number 1

I can't wait to see kagome kick their butt, please update soon.

Can't wait to see kagome kick some ass

Wipe the floor with them, let him mate Kagome despite everyone....

Love the story, please update soon.

awwwww.......cant wait until the next chapter

Great chapter, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!

This is great i can not wait for you to share

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.

Not bad plot-wise, you do have spelling errors, 1 correction it's tongue not tounge. If you have an email program most of them have spell-checker, just copy paste your chapter into an email, use teh spell-checker on it & then copy/paste it back into your WP doc & delete the email. That's what I did until I got MS Office. I think there's a free office program that has a spell-checker, I haven't used it in years though, OpenOffice? In addition to the spelling goofs here & there you're leaving out a word or 2, things like the, of, etc.

cant wait until the next chapters. i hope kagome is kickass

I really like this story. Cant wait until the next chapters

Pretty good story but watch the typos and pronouns. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Please spell-check your work; there are many errors.  It also wouldn't be a bad idea to put an advertisement on the forum for a Beta reader, as you could also use a bit of assistance with your grammar. 

This story is interesting, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Good Story so far, i really like it and can't wait to see where you take it.  A tip for you, never use text type in your writing.  If you want to say laugh out loud write it never put LOL.  It takes away from your story and makes you look like a poor writer.  But besides that i am enjoying your story and can't wait to see what happens next.

Plot seems OK, but it really needs to be run through a spellchecker because you have lots of spelling mistakes, you also said Kagome has 4 tails & then reduced it to 3 when they find Sess & Rin.