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Fubuki (Chapter 11) - Sun 03 Feb 2013

I have enjoyed what you have written so far, and am wondering if there is any more to go, or have you dumped it? please not the latter. as I would like to finish reading this

Fubuki


DP (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Nov 2010

MOAR!!!

If you don't update this soon I am  going to lose my ever lovin mind!

It really is a fantastic story, well written and interesting plot.

So, please don't keep me waiting! X)


Hesunohana (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

I quite like the plot. I think the next chapters are going to be even more interesting.

 

so, see you next time.

 

and Bravo !


maddie50 (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

Not quite the twist I was expecting, excellent. However, yikes! Plus a cliffy . . . damn.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

okay I'm totally hopeing that Kagome's all >:l Idiot human,s.... on this one! seriously! they have no freaking CLUE who they are dealing with! And i really hope they are all O_O OH CRAP! whent hey find out!  *throws update c0okies at you* mostly b/c your fic is giving me a plunnie! one that i'm not needing as i have lik 100 already!

 

this is rather awesome btw!


knifethrower (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

A half-bat demon and a half-dog demon?  That's easy!

But you have to hurry with an update, I need more quick!


Biatorisu (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Sep 2010

Wow!! I waitedtil now to review: too much twists but very good! your writting technique is impresive.  I loved with the cucumber thing..lol...anyway don't leave your readers too much time waiting!


maddie50 (Chapter 10) - Tue 21 Sep 2010

I'm guessing a fox demon.

I'm a little confused about the death threat, but I am sure more will be explained as the story unfolds.


River (Chapter 10) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

Interesting new developments!  Does Shippou know that the human Sesshoumaru wants is Kagome?  

I bet SPAM really killed Kagome's father for trying to leave their society... fanatic cults are like that.

Looking forward to the next chapter!


Kiaya (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 Aug 2010

maddie50 (Chapter 9) - Tue 13 Jul 2010

How depressing, so much time has passed and Kagome has not heard from Sesshoumaru. I suppose he is still "cleaning house" and that takes time. It is too bad she is unaware he is making an effort to make himself available. The plot thickens. Thanks for the new chapter.


jojo661538 (Chapter 9) - Sat 03 Jul 2010

what happended to shippo he should still be around shouldnt he anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


pauly (Chapter 9) - Tue 29 Jun 2010

I like this story very much, the plot is interesting and the writing style is great. Please update soon.    ;)


Eriean (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
I love it!!!

knifethrower (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

MOre!  Please HURRY!


NightQueen (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

WooooHooo your back! this was one of my favorite stories and it looks like it will continue to be.  This latest chapter is very intriguing and I don't think Kagome was fooled b those suits for a second.  I wish Sesshoumaru had popped up sooner and not let her alone so long.  I'm hoping he took this time to set his life in order so he can go after what he knows is completely worthy of him.  Excellent chapter and I'm already looking forward to the next one!


Kanna37 (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

Very interesting story - and I'm glad to see that it's being continued.  Looking forwards to the next chapter!

Amber


darksilvercloud (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

nice chapter :DDDD


Kay (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

Sorry.  I meant "then" not "than":

 But if you are going to use it as a continuation, THEN don't change the plot and the "feel" of the Hunter and Prey.

Sorry, I hate it when pple mix those 2 wrds! AND I DID IT!! lol~

My brain must be dead.. it's 3:35 am here, and it doesn't help that I just finished studying for one of my classes for law school.... blah~

*brain fries*

 


Kay (Chapter 9) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

hmm. it does seem like that the last chapter is a completely a different story; it has a different "feel." (like the plot has changed and that it's taking a different turn from the orignial). AND it doesn't connect well with the last chapter you left off...

However, leaving 'enticing the prey' (chapeter 8), as is, seems incomplete... Ch. 8, itself, does not have closure...

What happened to the little prologue you wrote  for Ch. 9 right after CH. 8? That seems promising.. it is, at least, a continuation.

Anyways, I adored (and DO adore) this fic, for it is very promising and an interesting read. I also do like you as an author becuase you have pretty good writing style, etc.

But,I do hope that you try to update frequently (at least on month-to-month basis or even every other month, as long as it's regular). Beucase if you don't, we (as readers) lose interest and forget about the story and its plot. Also, your writing and plans for this fic changes... as seen here. Please don't take this as a criticism but as an advice. I know life gets in the way.. but writer's block for a year is no excuse. =p

on the other note, Ch. 9 is also very interesting! I can already conjure images of where you can take this! Ch. 9 could be a start to a very interesting story on its own. But if you are going to use it as a continuation, than don't change the plot and the "feel" of the Hunter and Prey. You are the aurthor; i'm sure you know the best. I'm sure that you will create a wonderful fic no matter what you take with this! (esp. when I do not know what your plans for this is). ^^  And, having multiple scenarios and complications that come within the story for the characters are always fun, too. Merely, I suggest that you don't change so much of Hunter and Prey... beucase I really love this fic.


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