Wirklich süß die Geschichte!!!!
Charlene (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Mar 2012
| Very good. I enjoyed the way you explained at the beginning that there would be changes in Kagome and Shippo behavior and dress and acquainted us the knowledge that InuYasha's immaturity and selfish actions had not changed. You brought in how and why Kagome was injured in just the right way, I thought, to keep us from wondering through the whole story. All in all, a very good read.
I loved this, wish there was more.
sarhea (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Dec 2011
Loved this! It was wonderful seeing reading Sesshoumaru being proactive in his subtle understated way.
It has potential as a sequel or as is a one-shot. Would love to see Sango's reaction when she finds out what InuYasha did.
i freaking love this :3 though part of me does wonder what inuyasha was thinking leaving a human in a blizard, what if she'd frozen to death? smart on his part!
now that was just cool!!
why did u post it twice one under the other one
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