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Avidreader (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Leave a cliffy and follow up with a FLASHBACK - I wouldn't use them in every chapter, but only when necessary.  I think it would be best to have a more personal memory come through than the impersonal flashback.

 

Hope you update soon - I like this story!


MissKatt (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Flashbacks would be nice :3

 

And I love this, by the way!

 

-MissKatt


Inu (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

i'd prefer maybe a quick summary of what happened, not so much as a flashback.  people get stuck on flashbacks and try to work out every single detail perfectly while a summary is much more easier to write and understand.  great work so far! this is an original plot too which is awesome!


AP (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

I seriously *need* to know who he is!  A son of Inuyasha or relative perhaps?  I feel like it might get messy if it's Sesshomaru's son or something.  And Sesshomaru should definitely come in and sweep her off her feet asap ;)


Kat (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Since I love this story idea, I'll go with whichever will flow best with how you see the story going.  If flashbacks will highlight something you want us as readers to know more than just telling it let's go there... if you want to get to some kind of reuniting thing quickly go with the just telling, it all depends on where you want to take the story.


insomniac_amy (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

I like this story. I love the teasing interaction between Kagome and Shinji. I would prefer to read flashbacks, but I understand that you will have to follow wherever your muse leads you :)


1CarinoInu (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Love this little story - and so glad to have you and your hard drive back in the land of the iiving!

I'm partial to explanations rather than flashbacks, but I'll go with whatever the masses choose.  I'll read it anyway.

And I am really curious who this Shinji is...... is Sesshomaru alive?  More! More! More! (please)


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Dec 2011

Thank you for continuing this story I love it!  I think it is so fitting, and just like I would imagine Kagome to be in 2011!  Now to find out the mysteries this Inu holds!!


Avidreader (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Dec 2011

Yep, you've just added another unfinished story to your list and we, your wonderful and every loving readers, are anxiously waiting for the next chapter update.  I absolutely love the suspense!  ^.^

 

Oh, and by the way, if you are going to bang your head on the computer, please make sure none of your ideas leak out.  That would be tragic.


KouseiJL (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

I'll admit I'm incredibly intrigued by the plotline and how we're still guessing who this mystery inuyoukai is... Don't feel badly that you've started another unfinished fic... I know how having anything unfinished weighs on your conscience - but at the same time, I've found that I enjoy the journey to the end (whether it's "finished" or not). I will look forward to any updates whenever they may be! In the meantime, enjoy your writing - because we do!! Thanks for continuing this!

 KouseiJL


evilynmetal (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

Rofl, no more banging head >:O So you can still make this a short one. :P have some fun with it too. set a max of like 5 more chapters, and have x-mas with sess or retell the story of that x-mas and have it funnier then hell. Just my two cents. :)


Demetria Reignart (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

Teheheh! It's so cute! And I don't usually like AU but AWWWWW!!! Please do more, I'm so eager to see where this goes. 


COAIM (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

MORE :D <3


Cathryn (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

Well, you cant just leave it off here now. lol. it needs to be finished..........and we need to know whats gonna happen next. please? with some cherries on top? :)


NicoRavenPen (Chapter 2) - Sun 11 Dec 2011

~~HAHA! And YES you must continue because this is fabulous! Ohhhhh I am intrigued!! XD


Little Rin (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Dec 2011

Damn. Everyone seems to be having computer problems. This sucks. There's a computer tech in your midst and you can't take advantage of it because I'm who knows how far away.  Damn.


Nicka (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Dec 2011

Pleeeaaassseee don't make this a one shot I have to know who this youkai is and what happens next.


super kami guru (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Dec 2011

aaaahhhhhhh!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! UPDDDDDAAAAATTTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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