Thank you it was late at night when i got the itching to write it, ill fix it as soon as possible.

aww that's so cute, I could feel the love just radiating out of it.  But I noticed that you spelt their, thier. Its supposed to be their. Also a suggestion for overall, maybe you could throw in something of what Sesshoumaru is thinking/feeling to get a more roundabout feeling of the two. (I'm not to sure if that sentence actually makes sense to anyone else, if not pm me. It's to late to try and rewrite it XD)