Oh, you cannot know just how long I was waiting for a fic where Sessh would have to be the one to submit. How I enjoyed reading this chapter (well, not the queen bitch part)... I'm shuddering in pleasure. I sure wish there were more fics with a dominant Kagome in charge and Sessh following her for a change. You've outdone yourself, and I couldn't be more pleased.
Now, if only Sessh would stop fighting with himself and just let go (and be the one to lay on his back XD)
~lily
ilia (Chapter 4) - Thu 13 Oct 2011
Amazing... Loving where this story is going continue with it and update soon:)
....D: <-- thats drool!
I FREAKIN LOVE THIS!
rj (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Oct 2011
about time someone makes another kagome in charge story. Hopefully sess is the bitch in this one. chapter 4 please =)
Little Rin (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Oct 2011
It's a fun story. I have a grammar ocd, so I'd suggest a beta. Prey is caught, but you pray to a god.
gah so interseting! i'm totally all stalker chan over your ficcy!
I still love it, I don't know if you have gotten to this part yet, but what happened to the female demons? where they killed? maybe i just missed it in the previous chapter.
Also I'm finding the powers a little ambiguous. Does everyone have powers? Was Sango using hers to carry her male? Also why did she get so tired? is she weaker than Kagome?
Also in the heirarchy were do the Gaurdians fit in?
Futhermore, sometimes you said brunette and I had to assume who you were referring to , either Kagome or Sango.
Hope you like critique, lol, anyways I'm waiting for the next update!
Looove the idea, let the girls be dominant for a change, and let the dudes be the ones who submit once in a while. I can't wait to see his reaction when he wakes up XD
~lily
Wonderful. I positvely Love it. I noticed though that you kept saying pray. Did you mean prey? and at the very end wrecked was spelt wreaked. Only little spelling mistakes!
ilia (Chapter 2) - Sat 08 Oct 2011
This is such a good story please continue to write it would enjoy reading more
oh kikyo's a who-ah! *shakes fist at her* i swear i like her less nd less with every fiction!
O.O so suspeseful Can't wait to see whats going on! All these unanswered questions!
Love the originality, you have a great plot on your hands, use it wisely lol
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
*stalks fiction*
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