That was an achingly beautiful story.  It was believable and fit in with canon.  Very well done.

Ok I thought this story was heart wrenchingly beautiful.  A slow unfurling of feelings and passion beautifully told. Fabulous storytelling as always if you ask me!

Lovely, though so very sad. As always, your portayal draws in your reader, your discriptions clear and vivid enough to *see, lol.

Keep writing-  you've got a wonderful talent. And thank you for letting me know of this chapter's posting. I'm not familiar with Dokuga, lol, and am still trying to figure out the site, but I'll favorite you if the site allows. I'd like to read more from you.

Neisha

This story made me smile.

Aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! That was such a sweet but sad ending!! I loved it. Very beautiful, love! Very beautiful indeed.  

Beautiful end to a beautiful story. 

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! i found this on FFN and now on Dokuga too! this is an awesome ficy

Oooh...Very interesting. Very interesting indeed. UPDATE MY LOVE!!! :D :D I want...no I MUST read more!!

Ya know, I feel bad that you don't have more reviews for this story than you do. It's really excellent; detail-oriented, without being overbearing and the pace is simply wonderful. Not to mention the plot and storyline itself. Kudos to you for the story and kudos to your mom for being your beta :) I eagerly await your next chappie!

Aww, can't wait to see what happens next :)

Very, very wonderful my dear! I like it so far. :)

I like it :) Just based off of the first chapter, I think you could have a really nice story in the making.  Lucky for us, you already finished it, so we don't have to worry about updates not coming out ^__^  I look forward to seeing what happens next.  Keep up the good work!

Very poetic writing. I enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forwards to the rest. The middle was a little hard to follow, but once I found it...very nice.