You really are a wonderful writer. Another beautiful gift for Christmas. I remember going to church in the little village we lived in when my dad was assigned to Germany. It was beautiful and I miss it there very much. I love how you weave those traditions into your story. Cheers!

Overall I liked the story.  I enjoyed reading it very much.  I did have a small problem with it though.  I don't understand why Sesshoumaru waited so long to talk to Kagaome about the past and tell her he loved her.  It seems at the end of the story that he had started to have feelings for her during the feudal era and that they grew over time.  What was he waiting for? Why didn't Shippo come to see her?

Aside from these things it was a well written and fun story to read.

Sweet. I liked how you worked in the prompt effortlessly, by using a theme that naturally leads up to it...

wonderful story