Reviews for The Surrogate by Daniella

D (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Nov 2012

I was wondering if you where ever going to finish this. This story was great start and i been hoping for long time that this would be finish


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Sep 2011

I really like your story.  I can not wait to read more.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Sep 2011

Well this is a very interesting start, I can't help but feel bad for Sesshomaru being stuck with that money grubbing wench. And i just know that things are going to get hairy, but it sounds great so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!


MonMon (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Sep 2011

I love how real this story feels and love how you have set it up. There is a nice build up that can go either good or bad for all those involved.

Can't wait for the next chapter!


Rin (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Sep 2011

Hmmm. I like it. I want to read more, but I also see some things I had to ignore to enjoy it.

Sesshoumaru...He feels a little week in this. I'll give the benifit of a doubt and say it has to do with a) knowing Kagome so well, and b)the situation.....but I'm still not conviced it's quite right...his 'wife' is able to get away with too much, and I don't see how he could fall for her so fast, or manage to convince his family and himself of her being her trustworthy enough to leave the pre-nup out after only knowing her 5 months.....especially if his best friend is Kagome, and mika has so many issues with said best friend....

Also, where is Inuyasha? You've mentioned that his father, step mother, and adopted sister....but no brother yet.

But don't get me wrong! I wish there was more to the story! I'm looking forward to reading new chapters.


TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

Married a golddigger and just can't see it. I wonder how she would react to the surrogate?


amy (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

More chapters please!


White Luna (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

Very good start!


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