| Great idea for the story, I can't wait to read more! I added it in favorites! The story captured my imagination. It looks serious and romantic already. I like your portrayal of Kagome. All the little details in your story make the story alive. I loved how he suggested her tea to heal her troubles. I didn’t expect that, but it was a pleasant surprise. It made the story more Oriental in my opinion and more soulful. Please continue :)    
 | Loved this part:   She knew it was mocking her. Left a friend of mine somewhere, did you? Now look where you are. Your secret’s been told to a stranger.   :) love the writing so far, can't wait for more.    
 | Great beginning!!! I cant tell that this will be a wonderful story! Cant wait to see what he wrote her! :)    
 | WOw...maybe Sesshomaru left her a note of his own as a reply :clasps:    
 | :gasps: I bet Sesshomaru has a lot of questions!    
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